Poetry Contest

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Originally Posted by ktd222

Come on everyone in the forum we need three more poems before the judging begins. Will you not join the contest and submit a poem?

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YEAH!!!
Please keep it moving! LOL

Here's a choka I wrote:

The Sun
Waking mornig sun
Liberate me from my sleep
Tell me what will come
In this day you shine on me
Light the path I choose
Shine, the path of liberity
Ignite the fire of the dove
So I can one day be free

ok that's 8
i'll slowly start judging

bump
feel free to add more i'll make my choice this weekend!

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Originally Posted by water lily

"That has nothing to do with a Forbidden link... :confused: It's about fairies..."

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Just for the record, the name of the picture is Fairy Castle, so I used it as the title of the poem. The poem itself has absolutley nothing to do with fairies. The Yeats quote is meant to transition the title to the poem.

just like before

how did we get this way
how did we drift apart
i wish we could go back
knowing what we know now
before we loved, before we hurt
this friendship used to mean a lot
i beleived when you said it wouldn't change
we've drifted so far apart
i don't think we'll make it back
we're too far a part, the tide has taken charge
i wonder why we talked as friends
but not a word as lovers
we talked about everything and anything
then there was just nothing
i'm sorry for my incolence
and my arrogence
but most of all i'm sorry for this loss
just lets go back to before
and be like friends again

Spally, I really like your poem!
Where does it intersect with the picture chosen though? I couldn´t get it...
Please forgive me if I´m being stupid! =]

i guess it stands at the older i get the suckier my poems get. my new stuff sucks but my earlier poems were pretty good. and thanks, its good to know someone likes it.

still couldn´t get it...

its about my best friend/ex boyfriend.

I recon, but what has it to do with the fairy castle picture???

fairy castle picture??????

I think you might have posted on the wrong thread spally!!! Or maybe you haven’t read it…

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Originally Posted by Juarez Fialho

I think you might have posted on the wrong thread spally!!! Or maybe you haven’t read it…

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Or maybe its a poem about an "X"...

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Originally Posted by Jarndyce

Or maybe its a poem about an "X"...

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WHAT IN THE WORLD ARE YOU GUYS TALKING ABOUT???

this thread is a poetry contest, read the rules on the start.
The poems should be about the picture chosen by blondheart and the first picture chosen was THE FAIRY CASTLE.

Am I going crazy or are you?