Even though the last line cheats a bit on the syllables, I like that one.Quote:
Originally Posted by mazHur
Element
Physical form
Of a prime number. It
Can be a piece but not the whole
Puzzle.
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Even though the last line cheats a bit on the syllables, I like that one.Quote:
Originally Posted by mazHur
Element
Physical form
Of a prime number. It
Can be a piece but not the whole
Puzzle.
Thanks...you are basically right but I adapted it to read (while half asleep:)) as Ali-ment! Howz that?Quote:
Originally Posted by Calidore
Puzzle
the say life is
a puzzle not a piece
of cake to be taken with Black
Coffee.
coffee
sweetbitter taste
warmth in a cup of lush
brewing the juice of honey beans
so nice!
so nice
to kindly and
qualify for the tooth
sickly in the sunlight softer
(should hood)
should hood
all imperfect
reflections of ourselves
as contented and at ease is
appeased
appeased
the child agrees
to pocket the candy
and leave everything else behind
so sweet
so sweet
were the lost days
systematically
appearing in art orderly
arranged
arranged
amasingly
for the sake of us
appeasingly fresh and tamed
superb!
Superb!
This meal's fantastic!
So light on the stomach!
It's like it's melting in my mouth
Yummy!
Yummy!
Did you say that?
Well, whenever you sucked
eggs you would always exclaim, it's
Yummy!
yummy
it may well be
but whatever it is
give it some very good thoughts
love it!
love it
thorn's are lovely
in that they too belong
to the same bough where roses grow
and bloom
and bloom
surreal is
the sound of the drum kit
it's harsh it's brash it's what makes the
flint sting
flint sting
glowing into
the garden that part way
quarterly intervals only
take two
take tow
string four and five
traverese the deal with wheel
nine is juts another number
if only