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Hi all. Just a few notes, with a very overdue welcome to a few of you.
Welcome! :)
Also, we try to conform to a 5-7-5 (the 1st and 3rd lines have 5 syllables; the 2nd line has 7) syllabic structure for this haiku thread. When translating from the Japanese to the English, it isn't always possible to do, and may be a haiku without adhering to those strictures, but for general purposes we're a-tryin'.
*liked the direction the last post was headed in, btw
Thanks for the reminder amuse :D As some of you have maybe noticed this (haiku) is one form of poetry I can handle :p I'm gonna start with a new one.
flattered and happy
pleased to see so many here
haiku thread lives on
Haiku thread lives on
Though broken dreams and lost souls
Do cry mutiny
*Hi guys!*
Do cry mutiny
Cast aside your servile chains
You should all be free
You should all be free
If you lost core control, to
Act chaotically.
Act chaotically
and you will still find yourself
moving in a rythm
Move in a rhythym
Lyrically we learn of love
Synergy weaving.
Synergy weaving
Like threads of plaited thunder
Doth smote thine fair breast
*like the phrase "plaited thunder"
doth smote thine fair breast
he said - caught me to his dear
mouth, kissed me and died
*oh dear i feel like a ***** now with such a last line as that!
mouth, kissed me and died
eyes spoke of love and then closed
arms embracing loss.
arms embracing loss
loss fastening around as a parasite , slowly
sucking life , away
Sucking life away
Time and space displace our lives
Wayward in quicklime
Wayward in quicklime
Petty petty axes of strife fell
Mighty trees of love
Mighty trees of love
Freely giving oxygen
Which is why we breathe
Mighty trees of love,
reaching upward to embrace;
felled by biting axe.