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is that your poem, bookworm . . . ?
anyways, cheer up! :) it's not where you end up that counts, it's how you get there. 'cause we all end up dead anyways!
umm . . . . OK, perhaps that wasn't the most cheerful thing. But cheer up anyways. we love you! and existentialism/nihilism/solipsism (i never can tell them apart) are cool.
So happy we have an extended date. I will have to think of one when I am out shopping for gifts. Maybe by the 16th I can come up with a little one at least. I have some ideas. Thanks for extending the contest.
Yeah, thank you, Reisa! I'll promise I'll work hard on it..:D
I have always thought free verse harder to write than form poetry, but you did very well, Pensy. I just cannot imagine you as even writing the last line, for you certainly are not that type of person! Too kindhearted! ;) But, yeah, we all have our days when we snap and snarl at the world like a rabid dog! :lol:Quote:
Originally Posted by Pensive
This is my first free poem, without any rhythm and rhyme. I know it will be a heck but couldn't resist writing it down.
I am always unhappy
When I stop and think
Wake up and see what I am
I pushed her away when she asked me out
But I shouted, cried and wept bitterly
When the one I loved went for another man
While driving a car, I saw a begger
She asked me for money for her good
I shouted and sweared at her
In the meetings I talk about helping poor
Never did anything for them personally
Here I am dead sure
I am the one who provokes women rights
Every women should have them
Other than my sister, daughter, mother and wife
Peace, peace, peace and peace
That's what I say I always preach
But my own house resembles war ground everyday
Leg-pulling is what I do even with those,
Whom I call my very dear friends
Listen up friends! This is my profession
I like it when I am busy
Everything is then so different
From when I wake up and see
Realize what really I am!
I am a politician
A f****** b******!
I don't know. I just have a bad opinion about most of the politicians. (wouldn't give out the names for the sake of forum rules.) You might think that it is too cruel of me to say - but there are many politicians in this world who deserve to be hanged, in my opinion.Quote:
Originally Posted by Pendragon
Kill thousands of people for their sake. Promisses people and never fulfill those promises. Talk about an individual's rights and are always the ones who violate those rights. Say that if they will take the charge, things would get better and those things never get better, sometimes get even worse. Power-hungrey most of them are. I just can't help hating such types. :(
I don't say that there are not good leaders/politicians in this world, but by seeing most of them in my country, I have come to this conclusion.
Not really to cruel. I can think of some I'd probably take to the "necktie party" (old West for a hanging) myself! http://www.invision.smileyville.net/...s/vio (15).gifQuote:
Originally Posted by Pensive
Here is my entry! Finished it last night.:) It doesn't have a title yet. Suggestions would be welcome, though. PM me. Thank you!:D
The throbbings of age
And the Immanent Song brought her to life
A thousand beastial stares she had to withstand
While carrying the burden of false principles on her back
From her twisted mouth flowed twisted ideals
But she runs, to the pebbles of light
But the fingers of debauchery were freed from its chains
And with an anguished cry she fell,
Withered,
Pasted in the pages of History.
I'm almost done with mine, Reisa. Please don't close the contest yet. I just need to touch up. I promise I will post it by Friday, which is quite appropriate for this self-portrait since Friday is my birthday. *hint, hint* :)
okey dokey. party time again?
No party for me. Just dinner out with my sweetie.
And what kind of meal out does Sadie prefer? :p
Sadie? Well, it's my birthday so I get to choose. Our fancy Italian restaurant where I got the Limoncello. :DQuote:
Originally Posted by Riesa
I meant Brandi. oops. ;) who's sadie?
Brandi will only get her dog food. :p :lol:Quote:
Originally Posted by Riesa
but she's your sweetie. :( poor brandi, all those kisses she gives you and you wont even take her out to dinner.