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I'm with you chmpman, it's nice to see a nature one here and there, but if we were continuously praising the 'sweet smell of spring' I might just have to puke. (no offense intended, TheDave)
and that is a very good haiku you just made, btw.
Elysian spectre
Gently beckons us all to
Deaths secretive depths.
Why thank you, you're so kind.
Death's secretive depths;
A riddle to plague man's heart
As each suffers loss.
As each suffers loss
And the grave gains dust from dust
Tears water new buds.
Tears water new buds,
but the flower gets crushed,
'nother reason to cry
(See Virg., I'm not the only one who poetically shortens the odd word :D ).
'Nother reason to cry
The dreaded sixth syllable
Use apostrophe.
Use Apostrophe
for possession, ommission
not pluralizing
Not pluralizing
But staying singular in
A room of one's own
Still cheating! :D :nod:Quote:
Originally Posted by Petrarch's Love
A room of one's own
Is required for creativity.
Virginia Woolf.
Virginia Wolf
The silent stalker
death
This is pretty funny because I do not even know the rules of this poeme making.
...the Haiku is a traditional Japanese style of poetry. It consists of three lines of five, seven, and five syllables, in that order. Always. In this particular game, the first line of each haiku must match the last line in the preceding haiku. Your middle line will suffice :p...
The silent stalker
Roaming the jungles, hunting
Wristblades and bleached skulls.
edit, too slow
Wristblades and bleached skulls
Bad a** bikers at the bar
Raising hell and beer.
Raising hell and beer.
Don't worry about what's next
The world's in your hands
Raising hell and beer,
Cowboys tip ten gallons
At dishy cowgirls.
Cute!
At dishy cowgirls
I step up my two step kick
Slide guitar and drums.