some things you lose, and some things you just give away
Ill base mine off of it
still you.
just like you were.
Present falters my past.
Is that still us, or did I just
Let go.
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some things you lose, and some things you just give away
Ill base mine off of it
still you.
just like you were.
Present falters my past.
Is that still us, or did I just
Let go.
great poem!!!Quote:
Originally Posted by Hobbes
thank you for basing it off my sig!!!
let go
of what cannot
be held, but still caress
the shell that crumbles under your
fingers
fingers
warm and alive
reach in and caress my
soul; such audacity! Please, keep
me warm
me warm,
you warmer, he
warmest of all. It's not
right for him to be so warm when
naked
naked
thoughts like naked
women trespass my dreams
how should I tell them to leave me
alone!
alone
with no prospect,
myself and no counsel,
attuned to your own inner voice
captive
captive
of the tall grass,
the sequoia's reaching,
drowned in the rolling melt of snow
keep me
if you don't understand: Plato
Keep me
in the sunlight.
I must leave from this cave.
Its my right to feel and to want.
to Need.
That makes sense now. Well, It was a fun challenge to work off of.Quote:
Originally Posted by alakungfu
to need
the truth, I wipe
shadows from my blinking
eyes. Ardent reality! I
look away
Beliefs
Look away (three)
to the yonder
country of my past life.
Edelweiss stays forever in
my heart.
my heart
drifts from abject
to targeted lovelock
secure in the last extreme, fixed
in place
In place
far far away
flowers bloom in winter
stars twinkle in rain, is where I
lost my brain
lost brain
lost all in it
all the gray and the white
some new color seems to have it
engulfed