Three People Haiku

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10-12-2008, 10:53 AM
kiz_paws

All alone without
the green bird on the sill, perched
trills his morning song
10-12-2008, 11:32 AM
TheFifthElement

Unexpected sun
10-12-2008, 01:05 PM
CdnReader

Unexpected sun
Flits, glimmers earthward, descends
10-12-2008, 01:27 PM
alakungfu

Unexpected sun
Flits, glimmers earthwards, descends
from behind soured clouds
10-12-2008, 08:32 PM
Silven

Let go of the sun
10-12-2008, 09:22 PM
ampoule

Let go of the sun
Watch it bounce from star to star
10-12-2008, 10:01 PM
alakungfu

Let go of the sun
Watch it bounce from star to star
Release its glory
10-12-2008, 10:25 PM
Silven

Hey that one turned out to be a really nice poem.

Stationary sun
10-12-2008, 11:40 PM
qimissung

stationary sun
nuclear lion roaring
10-12-2008, 11:45 PM
alakungfu

Stationary sun
Lost, a champagne sibolant
10-13-2008, 07:23 AM
ampoule

I guess I'll go with quimis since it was first. Hope that's okay.

Quote:

Originally Posted by qimissung

stationary sun
nuclear lion roaring

stationary sun
nuclear lion roaring
its heat claws burning
10-13-2008, 03:15 PM
firefangled

Old friend, your suitcase
10-13-2008, 03:23 PM
ampoule

Old friend, your suitcase
May I please help you close it?
10-13-2008, 03:35 PM
firefangled

Old friend, your suitcase
May I please help you close it?
Will you be gone long?
10-13-2008, 05:04 PM
firefangled

Chocolate kisses
10-13-2008, 05:36 PM
mazHur

Chocolate kisses
smeared her lips like summer night
10-13-2008, 10:28 PM
alakungfu

Chocolate kisses
smeared her lips like summer night
a gorgeous deja vu
10-14-2008, 11:43 PM
qimissung

Quote:

Originally Posted by alakungfu

Chocolate kisses
smeared her lips like summer night
a gorgeous deja vu

That is remarkable pretty, alakungfu
10-14-2008, 11:45 PM
qimissung

almond scents the night
10-15-2008, 03:06 AM
kiz_paws

Almond scents the night
candles cast their gentle glow
10-15-2008, 06:23 AM
alakungfu

Almond scents the night
candles cast their gentle glow
shadows bask in time
10-15-2008, 02:03 PM
kiz_paws

Intricate snowflakes
10-16-2008, 12:54 AM
ampoule

Intricate snowflakes
delicate cuts on paper
10-16-2008, 01:11 AM
Silven

Intricate snowflakes
delicate cuts on paper
dont know what to say
10-16-2008, 01:12 AM
Silven

Quote:

Originally Posted by alakungfu

Chocolate kisses
smeared her lips like summer night
a gorgeous deja vu

Love this one!
10-16-2008, 01:20 AM
ampoule

Quote:

Originally Posted by Silven

Intricate snowflakes
delicate cuts on paper
dont know what to say

Have you never cut a paper snowflake?
10-16-2008, 02:18 AM
SecretUmbreon

Lazy summer's day
10-16-2008, 03:26 AM
firefangled

Lazy summer's day,
sunlight dissolving your dress
10-16-2008, 06:38 AM
symphony

Lazy summer's day,
sunlight dissolving your dress:
you, a naked sun.
10-16-2008, 10:48 AM
kiz_paws

Evening embers wane
10-16-2008, 11:07 AM
mazHur

Evening embers wane
night smears the world with darkness
10-16-2008, 02:08 PM
alakungfu

Evening embers wane
night smears the world with darkness
all randomness fades
10-16-2008, 03:07 PM
ampoule

Oh, you big orange globe
10-16-2008, 05:07 PM
alakungfu

You big orange globe
King of rising destinies
10-16-2008, 05:38 PM
mazHur

You big orange globe
King of rising destinies
Lord of star-crossed folks
10-16-2008, 05:39 PM
mazHur

an apple a day
10-16-2008, 06:58 PM
firefangled

an apple a day
nourishes one to the core
10-16-2008, 08:49 PM
SecretUmbreon

an apple a day
nourishes one to the core
and keeps doc away
10-16-2008, 09:36 PM
alakungfu

Star of the ruins
10-17-2008, 02:25 AM
mazHur

an apple a day
nourishes one to the core
for good health have more!

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