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So definite, enticing
Living, deceiving.
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'scape, pixelated.
So definite, enticing
Living, deceiving.
Living, deceiving,
Enchanting, and conceiving;
The crafty ones plot.
the crafty ones plot
a lifetime of void pretense
deception hides well
Deception hides well,
But does not offer freedom
From worry at all.
hello uncle lar...
from worry at all
to a bright clear sunny day
happiness is one
Hello, littlewing53!
:D
Happiness is one
Thing which should be shared between
At least two people.
at least two people
joined together in his name
find the love they seek
find the love they seek,
which was right in front of them,
made for each other...
Made for each other
Two young lovers take the plunge
Divine devotion
divine devotion,
laborers with spade in hand
whacking dissidents.
Whacking dissidents,
The Power grew, haling the proles to
Strive for naught.
<< i'm not sure about the "to" in the 2nd line :alien: >>
If I count correctly, you have 7 syllables at the word "the". But different people pronounce differently.Quote:
Originally Posted by symphony
Strive for naught
Set your sights on nothing, friend--
Never miss target...
never miss target
always madam ballista
silenced with a kiss
Silenced with a kiss
Whelmed by a touch
Embraced by a feeling obscure.
'embraced by' or 'embraced with'? :confused:
I'd lean towards WITH, but then that is me... :)Quote:
Originally Posted by symphony
Your poem is not exactly formatted to haiku (5-7-5 syllable structure), so I will proceed with the first line of your poem:
Silenced with a kiss
the harsh words died a quick death
a fresh beginning
a fresh beginning
deodorized sanitary
binned plastic wrapper
Binned plastic wrapper
sustenance from yesterday
delightful fruit drinks...
Delightful fruit drinks
Shimmering in the sunlight,
Drawing pleasant thoughts.
drawing pleasant thoughts
moonlight upon my paper
shows everything white
Shows everything white
The mountain covered in snow
A glorious scene
a glorious scene
children playing in my fields
among wild flowers
Among wild flowers
A flower grew out of the blue
Which reshaped the world!
Which reshaped the world,
sadly in need of repairs--
what hath man tainted?
What hath man tainted?
Angles' wings spotted with black
Charcoal grey feathers
Charcoal grey feathers
Wings aggressively beating
Against autumn skies
Against Autumn skies
The colour of pain blends with
Tears that fall like leaves
Against autumn skies
Oak leaves blaze orange and yellow
Vivid foliage
Two great haiku came up at the same time, so I shall respond to both (sorry, I just could not resist): :)
Tears that fall like leavesQuote:
Originally Posted by atiguhya padma
hot, salty, undiluted
till my heart is purged
Vivid foliageQuote:
Originally Posted by motherhubbard
springs up from ancient snowfields
I feel Spring's embrace
I'll try out both then!Quote:
Originally Posted by kiz_paws
Till my heart is purged,
deliverance from the vile
world, is not to be.
And...
I feel Spring's embrace;
running from this fragrant-fresh
world, is not to be.
:thumbs_upQuote:
Originally Posted by symphony
world is not to be
eaten, but lived in. Instead
I'm going to eat pets
I’m going to eat
Pets that I have raised from babes
That’s life on a farm
That’s life on a farm,
Early to rise, early sleep--
A Country Boy, yes...
A country boy, yes
Torn from his home on the farm
City life awaits
City life awaits
Traffic, noise, crowded subways
Hectic fast paced world
(i'm no lover of the city)
Hectic fast paced world
Full of opportunity;
I smell the roses.
I smell the roses
Filling the air with sweet scent
Decieved by the thorns
cecieved by the thorns
I dared not touch the flower
my fear was my loss
My fear was my loss,
My hope in life is my gain;
May all be well now!
maybe all will be well now
because I have shared with you
my deepest secrets