Poetry, one word at a time

You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh

You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why

You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there

You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase

You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh

You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life

welcome bongitybongbong, I love your name.... :banana:

You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my

You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure

You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh

You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child

You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of



(I liek how this is turning out, it worked out well wouldn't you say?) :nod:

You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny

(someone should do the punctuation, lol, begins to look ... weird without comas)

You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where

You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is

You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the

You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one

You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who

You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought

You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to

You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath

You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy

You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma

You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of

You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding

You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love

You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love
Tell

You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me

You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell

You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me

You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What

You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets

You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you

You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously

You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide

You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within

You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your

You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul

You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell

You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me,

You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell