Thoughts ablazin', words
amazin', deeds brazen, Oh,
to be a Hero!
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Thoughts ablazin', words
amazin', deeds brazen, Oh,
to be a Hero!
As a new week starts,
I aim to operate with
wisdom discreetly.
Every time a thought
Strikes me worthy of writing
My pen's ink runs dry
Writers block hits hard
Below the belt of the mind
Muse's boxing gloves
Writer's Block is meant
to be broken, therefore, think,
write, and enlighten!
:thumbs_up
Ineptitude is
something which really disturbs
the core of myself.
Flamboyance projects
pride and conceit,
antipathy and wrath,
and the other faculties
which degrade the body and soul...
Hi! The only "Rule"
to follow in this Thread is,
"Be not obscene, please."
Also, please be sure
to use the standard Haiku
format from now on.
:thumbs_up
Thank you.
Sincerely,
Uncle Lar
I hope I won't be
Haikuless; I really love
the Haiku format!
:thumbs_up
Time Management, in
this high tech day and age, is
very important.
The Weekend has come,
and I depart to enjoy
it; have a good one!
Sincerely,
Uncle Lar
:thumbs_up
Get a clue, Sherlock—
Shock poetry not stylish
Anymore here these days…
Write of love and pain—
Ecstasy and broken dreams
Show us—do not tell…
How does rejection
Really tear a heart—rip it
Apart, make you cry?
A tender moment,
How it seems to last forever—
Replayed in your dreams…
Tears fall like the rain—
Heart shatters, glass imprisoned—
Joy soars on the wind…
Let us have beauty—
Come tempt us—flirtatious words
Even darkness made real…
Pendragon
© 4/21/07
we know where we are,
when life's Hell brings pain,
we have few to guide us
through immolation lane
Talk of happiness--
Elated thoughts,
to curtail the strain,
we feel from antagnostic eyes,
seeping life turned old,
from wisps of abound aesthetics,
to dreams turned obscured mold
--like Saruman's oscillating eye,
whites of pupils supplanted gold--
(sorry, I don't know the standard Haiku format)
'Dole, a Haiku has seventeen syllables, divided thus:Quote:
Originally Posted by Adolescent09
5 in the first line
7 in the second
5 in the third
To do a poem in Haiku, connect Haiku until you reach your point. Here, no form to follow. On the other thread, last line of the previous Haiku becomes the first line of the next, so follow suit. You can still get amazing results!
Taking time to explain
The rules and regulations—
Just shows that you care…
We are here for fun,
Writing is our green playground—
Leave none misinformed…
Common courtesy,
Once shown, will be remembered—
And returned in kind
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Haiku is not hard;
just follow the Haiku Rules
and craft your Language.
Then you'll understand
How very easy it is
to start writing them
I so love Haikus
I scribble them all the time
for my enjoyment
I once wrote Haikus
over and over one day
Then my hand was tired
Now I have to leave
For the bell tolleth for me
I now go to school
(good bye!)
Hopefully today
you have solved or will solve some
of your Mysteries.
ever so gentle
he told the story of love
bouncing from the page
bouncing from the page
it doth always ricochet
bouncing sweetness back
Your Haiku is fine,
Adolescent09;
keep up the good work!
:thumbs_up
Sincerely,
Uncle Lar
thank you uncle lar,
your swaying, all seeing eye,
pervades my body
happiness is good
tickles of a smiling face
all forgotten love
It finally feels
like Spring, with the Sun shining
its warm rays on us!
Give a helping hand
When you see someone needy
Next time could be you
So come lean on me—
Whenever you are not so strong—
I help carry you…
The day swiftly comes—
When we are all gonna need,
Somebody to lean on…
Talk to me my friend,
If you have a hard problem,
I am still on line…
Between us together.
We may find right solutions,
On how to solve it…
If you need a hand
In your moment of sorrow—
Cry on my shoulder
I will be your friend—
In Shadows or sunshine, rain
Or rainbow, still close…
Do you understand—
Differences make strength—
So come lean on me…
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Very nice Haiku,
Pendragon. Have you always
been so creative?
Change just as Change is
necessary in order
to blend with Life well.
Blend with Life through the
Embrace of Change and one can
transmute adeptly.
Hello everyone
This is my first post. I’ll introduce myself a little later when I have more time.
Haiku
Strong waves come again
Feel the stretch and pull and force
Squat, breath, push, release
Very nice Haiku,
motherhubbard! welcome to
this Haiku Forum.
:thumbs_up
Sincerely,
Uncle Lar
the melting chasm,
climaxes volcanic points,
and permeates red,
on vast scalding earth,
where torn hearts and misery,
paints vile on black beds
Thank you
Haiku
A sphere of color
Floating on air like magic
Then suddenly…POP!
Sometimes I wonder
if anyone really knows
anything at all.
You see what you want
When your eyes review strangers—
Maybe an angel...
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Angels and Demons;
sometimes it is hard to know
which is which clearly.
Have a great weekend,
everyone, and keep up the
good work from now on!
Sincerely,
Uncle Lar
How fun to express
My secret thoughts in Haiku
It makes me happy:yawnb: