but I love it raw
'cause I'm a cute red bunny
frying in your pan
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but I love it raw
'cause I'm a cute red bunny
frying in your pan
bunny? red? :D :P :D
frying in your pan
sweetbreads port wine and garlic
decadence spurs life
decadence spurs life
as the old feasting Romans
shouted to their slaves
shouted to their slaves
plantation owners evil
devil incarnate
devil incarnate
Beelzebub, Lucifer
became friends for life
Became friends for life
And the squirrels and the birds came
To sing them a song
Aww guys thanks for the explanations, but Bart's is way too technical...I should know IPA and linguistics and blah, but I find them so dry, I'm much more istinctive so having to translate something in IPA would really put me off....
Maybe I'll try to participate anyway, trying to learn from your haikus how the syllables should be (I'm good at infering things rather than using technical devices). Not now tho, I'm in a rush and that would need thinking...my brain can't make it ;)
Bart, ehm...which hints? Btw I was thinking of revising that poem and post it here... when I'll be out of this working week and be back at the lazy life of a lazy student.
Am I interrupting again? Last time, I promise. (Maybe...;))
To sing them a song
Twit Twit Twit Jug Jug Jug
Jug Jug Jug Tereu
ps. Koa: you can also just pronounce the line and count the vowels you HEAR, using your fingers... I am looking forward to your read your contributions. And besides: the allusions I made refer to that poem of yours, starting with the line
Come l'albero impassibile
!!!
Jug Jug Jug Tereu
You see me and I see you
Anyone seen den?
Anyone seen den
On Horseback in Amsterdam
Who started this all
Who started this all
What sweet Canadian Muse
Has tickled our ears?
Has tickled our ears?
You mean the Ice *****? Oh yes,
She comes from the North
She comes from the North
To freeze our grins, make us ice
And then to crack us
And then to crack us
She is side-splitting you know
And she has a whip.
And she has a whip
To strain her horse when needed
And gallop away
And gallop away
Well, not exactly. The whip
Has many uses.
And gallop away
To chase her tresses, all gone
blown off by the wind
(sorry, I just cut 10 inches of my hair)
Blown of by the wind
That inclines kamikaze
But don't do it twice
But don't do it twice
with an unfamiliar word
the brain gets confused :P
the brain gets confused
if small things suddenly mean
something different
something different
in the ways that we can speak
all beauty therein
All beauty therein
A blister on the eye of
Poetic vision.
poetic vision
twisted deep and dark, causes
nonsense haiku-ing
:P
Nonsense haiku-ing
Well, now there's an idea
I can relate to.
I can relate to
a blanket of snow, so white
experienced not :(
experienced not
your perception of these things
is alien to mine
alien to mine
doublespeak twist hidden word
double entendre
Double entendre
Comme ce est l'echafaud moche,
Hypocrite lecteur
Hypocrite lecteur,
Welcome to America
Here, have some french fries.
Here, have some French fries
A gallon of dirty coke
Breakfast from Iran
Breakfast from Iran
Naan o paneer o sabzi
succulent kabobs
succulent kabobs
dripping with butter and herbs
charred, mmm, I'm hungry!
charred, mmm, I'm hungry!
it's breakfast time here again
i crave lots of sweets
I crave lots of sweets
A cream sugar kiss. O sweet
Are the sweets of sin.
are the sweets of sin
so alluring to draw on
the pounds, oh! my weight!
The pounds, oh! my weight!
The heavy ribald flavor!
Leaves a bitter taste
Leaves a bitter taste,
Bitter like a hot tear-drop,
Trickling down your face.
trickling down your face
ink of procrastination
frustrating papers! :evil: :evil:
frustrating papers
Whitman looms over my head
excuse to ignore
excuse to ignore
reality bites me hard
alone adrift lost