October 2011 Elimination

Congratultaions to the author of 'Forever YOung'...it was an awesome story. :)

Heya guys, I'd be really grateful if you could take time to comment on my story 'The Alleyway' and tell me where all I went wrong. Criticisms greatly welcomed. Thanks.

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I would to thank everyone for readied my story 'Small White Boot'.
Well done to writer who wrote 'Forever Young'.

Thanks for sharing, zoo. You helped make it very hard to choose.







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I nearly missed voting for this round. But thankfully logged on three days before the deadline.

Congrats to the writer of Forever Young! It was so well-written.