old, raunchy lovenotes

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Originally Posted by paperleaves

Thank you, Jer :)
I didn't know if the beating off in the closet part was too much, but it's an image I wanted to portray...thanks for appreciating it lol!

love
kate

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It seems my previous response to this was vaporized, maybe because I listed some of the available alternatives to "beating off," all of which I thought were either too clinical or smirky or cute.

This is an extraordinary poem paperleaves, it really carries, no drags the reader along, helplessly entranced. It manages to be at once vulnerable and powerful. Beautiful stuff.

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Originally Posted by PrinceMyshkin

It seems my previous response to this was vaporized, maybe because I listed some of the available alternatives to "beating off," all of which I thought were either too clinical or smirky or cute.

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If by "vaporized" you mean "deleted", no posts have been deleted in this thread.

thank you, fifth!:)