Lo-kus

Love the detachment your poem evokes.

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

seagulls

beach weather - anytime
seagulls glide blithely by foraging
for stranded surf bits

7/4/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Loved the image

The beach at night

Foam topped waves,
monstrously rolling to the shore
spilling their white milk.

Wish I was at beach :) Well done !

acrostic cat / lo-kus

cold in reflection
artful their impish paws
teasing brings joy

7/22/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Enjoyed.

Without any metaphor

Enjoy cold sunny mornings
Happy animal´s noises
Friendly humans

:)

quail / lo-kus

evening cooling
quail gather near a thicket
ready to race away

7/26/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Cute!

The Wombat

A real wombat
Needs no hat nor bath
Its womb is the earth

a serene morning
Birds sing, dog bark in the sunshine.
Nothing left for the last line.

wombat: very existential

"a serene morning": lol !

pastoral day

sunrise summer morning
adorning this pastoral day
portrays blessed bluebell skies

8/3/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

crow / heptasyllabic verse

a cool start to a hot day
a crow in the distance calls
nary a whisper of wind

8/15/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Sorry, tailor, forgot to open this thread.
Enjoyed both vignettes.


A windy, stormy night
Humans screeching in the dark
A single bird announces dawn.

the deep dark forest

in the deep dark forest
where giant sword ferns rise
færies weave their magic

8/16/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Charming!

The Locust

Yearning for forbidden plains

Streaming with his swarm

Leaving dried pastures behind.

Pick clean and move on :(

only the fortunate

only the fortunate
few have seen them -
færies fire the imagination

8/18/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Enjoyed!:)


Monday morning

Yawning stores,
Sleepy cars passing empty streets
Birds fulfilling their chores.