You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
(is punctuation done on consensus, or is someone going to step up and grammarize this sucker?)
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You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
(is punctuation done on consensus, or is someone going to step up and grammarize this sucker?)
Maybe those who are adding the last word, or who just has, can do the punctuation depending on their take?
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song
(i have no clue anyone want to volunteer to punctuate this poem?)
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song swiftly
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
wafting -
*oops! same time oh no*
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely
(there incorporate teh two)
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatros
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the