If This Is My Last Poem on LitNet...

Wish you all the best, Pen.

Our prayers and thoughts are with you Pen. God bless you.



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Originally Posted by Virgil

God bless you Pen, and let us hope for the best. A nice poem by the way. I don't know if this was mentioned, but shuldn't "befell" be "befallen"? Not sure myself.

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Poetic license to keep the end words in rhyme. It's archaic, but can be used in that sense.

Hey Pen, just noticed your signature:

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"The road behind, not the road ahead, is the one forever barred to our footsteps." Dale Harris.

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That's really profound. I love it. This Dale Harris guy must be very smart. ;)

Pen, this poem gives me glimmers of the song from Godspell..."On the Willows There"...I think that's the name. It's lovely, the song and your poem.