It was my pleasure.
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It was my pleasure.
Hello, Ace, I won't criticise your work, for the others have made good points. I just wanted to say that overall the story was well done, I enjoyed reading it very much. As well, I would like to wish you luck in the writing competition for your school. :)
Update: Didn't win.
But you tried, and you have a powerful story written and shared with us, who appreciated your endeavor. Keep that pen moving, Ace, you are a great writer. :)
So what became of this unnamed soldier? It's not clear if he continued his service in the SS afterward.
You know how I like to work in bible verses in my stories? Here's a sentence I would add if it were one of mine.
"The night was unusually still at 4:22 AM. It was time for our exodus."
Hi Ace
I like your story. Mcory, Zippy, and SheykAbdullah have been much help
to you. Go on writing more stories. Godspeed.
Thanks. I actually wrote one that I MAY be willing to share... but I don't share my material very often, only shared this because... well, I don't know really, lol.
Just watch out for a new post by Ace. :)