Immersed in silence,
The night glow is luminous;
Alone, I see the stars.
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Immersed in silence,
The night glow is luminous;
Alone, I see the stars.
Alone I see the stars
Beneath Mark Antony's soul.
Drink wine and love women.
:D
Immersed in silence
I feel emptiness within
engulfed forever
engulfed forever
but you better get loud quick
because we all are
(ejarg, hope you have a great time on the forums; you're supposed to continue from the last line of the post above and mantain the syllable(I suck at spelling?) rule.)
Because we all are,
We all can become as not;
Death tolls the last bell.
Death tolls the last bell -
the saved ran away from the
solomn overcast
Oops! My bad ... I was at the wrong page, and I saw Bebbin's post as the last one ...Quote:
Originally Posted by Adolescent09
Quote:
Originally Posted by Bebbin
I will try to fix with some of your lines; start with Virgil's last line -
Drink wine and love women.
I feel emptiness within,
engulfed forever.
Last two line are by Ejarg, Hey, E, you did not know you felt that way about women, did you?:lol:
Now the rest of the Haiku's work anyway. I will use the very first line in my new Haiku.
Adol, no problem - I fixed it to keep flowing along after yours.Quote:
Originally Posted by Adolescent09
Because we all are,
We all can become as not;
Death tolls the last bell.
ktd, here is the next in line - sorry I had to move you to have it all fall in place.Quote:
Originally Posted by ktd222
Solomn overcast
Clouds with stale vaporous fumes,
Poison existence.
poison existence
subvert the heart of being
her room is empty
Her room is empty
Anguish, loneliness, sorrow
Like a lover lost
Like a lover lost
Solitude is all she feels
Her heart is empty
Janine, thanks for making it right again. Sorry guys for the confusion ... my bad :(
It's ok. Waltz onQuote:
Originally Posted by ejarg7
Her heart is empty -
no gunk - for lover's to toss
like dirty glances
like dirty glances
peeping toms at a window
watching her movements
watching her movements
sultry sinuous dancer—
save the last dance, please
save the last dance, please,
I a lonely wallflower—
await patiently—
await patiently,
for my dance ethereal lady—
touch of your cold kiss
touch of your cold kiss—
release, my sorrows final
lady death I come home…
Lady death, I come home;
Please do not bar heaven's door,
I crave starry rest.
ejarg7, no problem. I messed up my first couple time on this site. You will get the hang of it soon enough.
I crave starry rest,
and solace's cozy cave,
but you are the best,
but you are the best,
not really, you are much better,
with your words so wise.
Good day Adol!
with your words so wise,
one wonders why you don't have
a crowd following
a crowd following,
a sea of heads in sunlight,
mass confusion reigns.
Mass confusion reigns
the forest fire blazed onward
run swift ye creatures
run swift ye creatures,
darkness folds all around you;
shadows in moonlight.
shadows in moonlight
took the shapes of grave diggers
burying the earth
burying the earth,
gray ash taints tops of tombstones;
volcanic shadows.
Volcanic Shadows
Casting waves of lava pool,
Into the deep cliffs.
Into the deep cliffs
spews hot lava upwards like
solar flares of suns
solar flares of suns
icepicks stabbing through the night
of my root canal
of my root canal
do not expect me to speak—
Novocain hangover!
Novocain hangover!
I can hardly talk today;
Most people are glad.
Most people are glad
Cause they think they are alive
But my trunk is dead
but my trunk is dead,
at least it smells of rain and
faded wedding lace
Hi Janine! :wave: :D
Faded wedding lace
From your face has disapeared
Into dark corner
Into dark corner
squirmish with one's lonesome pride,
two minute timeout.
two minute timeout
Last minute shot, here we go
Alfa Beta Go!
alfa beta go!
sweat flies, bodies crash beneath
the stadium lights
The stadium lights
Glare painfully in my eyes,
Dry winds whirl wildly.
Dry winds whirl wildly
The cheers, ringing in my ears
Chaos all around