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unconcious and trapped
twisted metal surrounding
onlookers whisper


congrats on the big five oh oh, btw Em.

Thanks, VB! I'd like to thank my mother, my father, god, uppers...

Onlookers whisper.
Yes, I'm shopping at Wal-mart.
Freaks need shampoo too.

Okay, fine, I'm not gonna let this thing die. I'm responding to my own haiku. I'm a hypocrite, sue me. :p

Freaks need shampoo too,
for to wash their tattooed scales.
Beautiful horror.

Beautiful horror
Sorrow sometimes delightful
Lifetimes portmanteau

lifetimes portmanteau
stashed in back of mind's closet
to later reminisce

(yeah I know it's 6 syllables :p )

to later reminisce
images thoughts and feelings
heavy baggage or?

heavy baggage or
beautiful luggage for life's
important journeys?

important journeys
bring me to new peace black dots
treasures in your eyes

*re: "your": globally speaking

Treasures in your eyes
A carrick between your legs,
Gate to new worlds

Ask if you have no idea what a Carrick is ;)

*looks up carrick* meep! okey dokey then.

Gate to new worlds,
spilled ink and sorcerous pen;
your words bind my soul.

your words bind my soul:
avert! i thunder and draw
steel(ed) metaphors forth

(tee-hee)

:D I like the (steeled) metaphor, az. I believe I shall steal it...lol...heh...lame...

Steeled metaphors forth-
drawn, I attack with wit-force;
do you take my point?

"point"
:D oh, yeah

eee :D :D

Do you take my point?
Shall I whett your appetite?
(That's disgusting, huh?)

(That's disgusting, huh?)
I swear, no more metaphors
of such a nature. :D

Of such a nature
was I made: to be silly
just for boredom's sake.

Just for boredom's sake
do I answer my own posts.
This I write for you. <---(this! Go to it. :D)

This I write for you,
It is nothing but letters
Wording for your love

wording for your love
darning for your socks flirting
for your tempting pecs

For your tempting pecs
I really got no desires
Stinking flesh meaningless

hey avalive, welcome to the thread, it's nice to see you writing haikus with us! btw, you're doing what i've done, too (usu. on the last line), the syllabic structure here is 5-7-5; you have 5-8-6. look forward to more of your contributions! :)

Stinking flesh meaningless.
No medal for this "hero,"
alone on the sand.

alone on the sand
william blake thinks up one
more poetic line

more poetic line[s]
flow serpentine and languid,
caressing the mind.


(Shut up. :D I can, too, do that.)

caressing the mind
ideas in books leap forth and
penetrate my eyes

penetrate my eyes
with cold steel stares that shiver
their way to the floor.

Sorry, I couldn't resist the Carrick thing *^_^*

¬_¬;; My A-Level English Literature exam is on Othello.....

CAN'T ANY OF YOU PEOPLE PEN A DECENT ENDING? THINK OF THE THE NEXT POOR SOUL TO TRY AND JOIN THE THREAD!

Lol, only joking!

Their way to the floor
Life flashes by, an instant
Of complete freedom

:d

of complete freedom,
for some of the fun is en-
ding on an odd note

ROFLMAO

Amuse i love you more and more each day!

likewise!! :)

ding on an odd note
dong on the even ones
keep beat with the bell

keep beat with the bell
rat-a-tat-tat - no not the
drum the bell, you there! :D

Quote:

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Originally posted by HaloDestroyer
CAN'T ANY OF YOU PEOPLE PEN A DECENT ENDING? THINK OF THE THE NEXT POOR SOUL TO TRY AND JOIN THE THREAD!

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Hehe sorry, HD! I usually pay very close attention to that, but i was frazzled by my own first line and so relieved to have all the syllables drop into place that I didn't even consider what I was leaving for the next person. It's a real aberration for me, I'll remember this time. :D

LOL@az and VB. You two crack me up. :D It's turning into a Dr. Suess thread, isn't it? That would be much easier.....hmm... no, I decline temptation.

Drum the bell, you there!
Let your melody ring forth.
Pound the world's eardrums.

Pound the world's eardrums
With the sound of rhetoric
Sum of all we hear

Sum of all we hear,
enveloping cloud of shame.
Lies stronger than truth.

Lies stronger than truth
Fill the hearts of billions
Cause them to believe

Cause them to believe
Will them to take up the cause
Force past vacant eyes

Force past vacant eyes
That have seen too much and yet
Have seen too little.