Eight-Word Poems

came
the rain
and washed
the sun away

Quote:

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Originally Posted by ampoule

Hummingbird!
I've seen, now know
your drinking hour.

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Love this one, Amp. Thanks! :)

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sun streams,
flowing into all the spaces
between

raindrops
little silver
gifts from God
reviving life

clever, firefangled, and quite beautiful, AdoreroDio.

sweetly
snoring cat,
dreaming dreams
unavailable
to me

I've got a cat
with an
alien meow

A bud,
No, look!
A tiny tomato grows!

Dear Members,

I weep,

For a day lost in ambience.

She twirls,
orbiting
for that moment
the universe

extract your
cool fingers
from my
pulped heart

Eight words
will never do
in place
of nine

Longing
for you
I tremble
at the distance

Those who can't count
write poetry instead.
(:p)

Quote:

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Originally Posted by CdnReader

Those who can't count
write poetry instead.
(:p)

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Did you mean, perhaps

Those who can NOT count
write poetry instead

?

Or maybe...

Those who can't count
just plain can't count

?

Or...

Never use seven words
where eight will doj

?

The distance
is the same
lover to lover