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Janine
Cool, :Dare you on now? I hope you be careful though. It might be nothing but you can't be sure. You really should wait till nightime to post. More happens at night here anyway...lots of night-owls like me!;):lol:
Well, I haven't been able to get on since. :( I don't understand why sometimes yes and sometimes no.
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No, not really, remember when I asked you, if we did this 'longish' story, if you could post segments that would not overwhelm me? I think when I saw that last chunk of text, I moaned and then quickly departed and put off answering it - I get overwhelmed when you throw too much at me at once. My feeble brain just works that way. I am more detailed minded and have to work by stages - it has always been that way with me - maybe I have a little bit of attention deficit; I can work in a perimeter only if I keep it organised - jumping around from beginning to end and then to middle is just not possible for me. I have to build my concept of the story starting from the first parts of text. Can you understand this? That is why I limited myself last night and before to only a few of the text paragraphs - then I could zero in and really see what was going on.
I guess. Ok.
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That way I can post and appear brilliant....just kidding with you...I'm a little more humble than that. Literature does not actually come easy to me, Virgil, remember I am an artist first in my soul and I think actually this is why I am drawn to authors like Hardy and Lawrence - because they both were artistic and they both use words like paint - very visual authors indeed. I have to look at their canvas and see the individual words and they are like brush strokes and they add up eventually to the entire painting - the story and the concept. See what I am driving at?
Yes. But you do a good job of understanding literature.
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This is true but don't you think that she saw the wild animal qualities in Romero; she definitely, perhaps subconsciously, wants to get him alone. Then she does and is terrified actually - still the magnetism is there, drawing her upward into the mountains - she does feel desire but then she turns it off at some point....it is true she wants it to be romanticized - definitely!
True, she does. But perhaps she only wants to see the wild animal in Romero. I don't think she fully comprehends what it means to experience the wild.
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This is true; hey, I think most woman are romantists, don't you? I don't see that Romera would be the type to entertain her whims of romantism....he is not the 'wine and dinner' type.
:lol: No I can't see him in a candle lit French restaurant with a glass of Bordeaux. :D
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He is more the natural man - no fuss, but so connected to the environment and sensual in his own way. In actuality I do find that quality romantic and sometimes an aloof man can really turn a woman on - don't know if it is the challenge of it or what. There is something internal that is like a spark indeed and a brillance that only some can percieve. I don't know exactly what Dollie wanted from him but I do think she wanted the whole package - she was intrigued by his animalistic allure and yet she also wanted the refinement and the communication.
Perhaps she did. And under regular circumstances, perhaps Romero could have given the refinement and communication. Perhaps the wilderness changes him, or opens upa part of him that was kept closed. We'll have to see later.
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Romero can only provide the one and not all for her. I think this also is key to the outcome. As soon as his 'animal' takes over she is blind to the spark, she is immediately turned off and finds him repulsive. The fact that this early passage describes him as not like other Mexican's indicates to me that she saw him differently or perceived more refinement there than actually was. It is hard to say, Romero may have been a mix also, but his animalistic, sensual instincts take over...much like in other stories - such as "The Fox" and "The Virgin and the Gypsy". But in this tale the man is up against the opposition with the rejection at the end; this makes him totally go animalistic. He may have been softer if she has connected with him - more like Rupert in WIL, but the rejection of his manhood send him off on a path of utter destruction. His manhood and the phallis are insulted.
Yes I agree, but also see my comment on the paragraph above.