It's ok Madhuri. The haiku has to have this form:
5 syllables
7 syllables
5 syllables
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It's ok Madhuri. The haiku has to have this form:
5 syllables
7 syllables
5 syllables
moments...stupendous,
like the eye in the sky that
never is revealed.
never is revealed—
like a skilled fan dancer—
just tantalizing…
Please stay on this thread, Uncle Pen.
Just tantalizing
Pop! Fireworks I hear outside.
It's not New Year yet!
It`s not New Year yet!
But kids play enthusiastically
Trees dance for the breeze
Trees dance on the breeze
Flowers shaking for the wind.
Are you happy now?
Halla Poetess!
Hi Lainy!
Are you happy now?
New Year dawns with simple hope
Our inner lights do glow!
Hiya Lainy!
Our inner lights do glow
Yet sighs of past remains,
Of joyful memories behind
Erm...syllable count issues...what should I do?
Of joyful mem'ries
Behind which hide a thought of
A man's truest love
A man's truest love—
Childhood dreams that never ever end…
Cats and hamsters reign! http://www.cosgan.de/images/smilie/tiere/g010.gif http://www.cosgan.de/images/smilie/tiere/g070.gif
[EDIT: I had edited the poem, Robin, but I guess I hit the wrong button or something--silly me!]
5-7-5
Cats and hamsters reign -
Excuse me - rain from the sky
Like dogs and gerbils
Like dogs and gerbils
human acquaintances all
love interaction
Like dogs and gerbils
I, too, am an animal,
but with no sixth sense.
fixing
..........
like dogs and gerbils
human acquaintances all
but with no sixth sense
not bad ktd222
but with no sixth sense
til one part is lost in us
compensate do we
Compensate do we
for all sorts of evil things.
Time will take its toll.
Time will take its toll
On all, perhaps, save a boy
Who might've been me
Time will take its toll
When we have wasted talents
On days of mundane.
Brainstorm - sorry, can you fix it. I can't think now how to do it....thanks.
On days of mundane
Hamsters, squirrels, they'll save us.
Come and play with us!!
Hi Lain, the famous one armed model!
Come and play with us!!
Today's my birthday party.
We'll dance time away....
We'll dance time away....
In dreams, when my eyes lay shut -
A place almost real.
A place almost real
Will not be found on our earth,
But in time's beyond.
But in time's beyond
We go to search heaven's place
There embrace new life.
There embrace new life
In a new life's clear blue eyes.
Dear cherished grandchild.
Dear cherished grandchild—
I know you are still not here,
But I can wait yet… http://www.cosgan.de/images/kao/haushalt/k020.gif
Was that for me? Last time I checked I was your niece, so maybe not. :(
And Janine! The famous blue-eyed, cheerful-smiling friend of mine! (Can't insult you. :p)
But I can wait yet
For moments slipped between you
And me...I love you
Sheesh.
And me.. I love you
No matter how far you are
My heart is in me
My heart is in me,
Waiting only a transplant
Into thy bosom
into they bosom
goes the soil for dirts rich growth
good deeds the gard'ner
Good deeds the gard'ner,
Of life's precious bounty, brings
Full harvest of minds.
Full harvest of minds
Munches for the invasion
Zombies are coming
Zombies are coming
Corpses are slowly dying
Mummies are eating.
Mummies are eating
Worms in their tombs; contrary
To what we would think.
Spooky.......
Hi Lain, Is it Christmas in the Phillipines or is it over now? It is almost Christmas here! Another half hour or so. I have to get to bed so Santa Claus can come, otherwise he will leave me coal in my stocking!:santasmil
Funny Janine! It is already 12:41 in the afternoon now, December 25. So most of the happenings are done. http://www.cosgan.de/images/midi/haushalt/h070.gif Doing that now. After lunch.
To what we would think
Depends on the ideas
The mind can concieve.
The mind can conceive
Things we can't hardly imagine
If we have sight within.
Lain, wow, our 25th is here now, but it is night and I am going to bed. Tomorrow we have all day to enjoy it at my son's and his wife's house. They came here tonight - very nice time! Have a good recouperation! Rest up! Janine
If we have sight within
is quite a contradiction -
you shallow bastard!
You shallow bastard!
You are swimming at this end,
So try to be calm.
'So try to be calm,'
said the man, after he flicked
pens in the ceiling.
Pen's in the ceiling
We try to rescue him but
He uses his fire
:p