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Compliments to the participants of the last few pages. I read them all - some great stuff here (love the moon ones) and some really funny haiku, too...like the dancing section so much. I love those dancing bananas within the haiku's. You two were really on the same train of though. The other ones I liked were the heartbreak ones and they felt like therapy. How funny, I need therapy this time of year!
Will leave next haiku to next poster... see my last post for last line.
Haunts my hearts of hearts
That beauty who took my soul
Whose kiss killed my pride
Whose kiss killed my pride
Whose love thrilled me to the bone
Carved stark naked stone
Carved stark naked stone
stoic, cold and loose-jagged
clefts in solid earth.
clefts in solid earth
are similar to the cleft
I had after birth.
I had after birth,
Remembrance of a past life
Primal and wondress
Primal and wondrous
The soft shore lies welcoming;
Sweet land to be raped.
Sweet land to be raped
Flowers, leaves in the garden.
So soft, now so strange...
So soft, now so strange,
That fine skin beneath her breast,
Pearl warm as feathers.
Pearl warm as feathers
They all want it crucified
Buried deep in sea.
Buried deep in sea
Seal, not in death, but in pain
Dark oblivion
Dark oblivion
inky black water laps at
my face, pale and cold
my face, pale and cold
sharp needles; ice penetrates -
winter blasts blow harsh
winter blasts blow harsh
but light gleams brightly from the
stores, houses, and trees
Stores, houses, and trees
Illuminated streets glow
Christmas shines anew!
Christmas shines anew!
Holiday cheer permeates
simles all around
(And) Smiles all around
As the carolers are in
Chorus "Batman Smells"
(sorry for the fix- I just noticed a missing syllable...)
Chorus "Batman Smells"
Small children romp, blithely play
Holidays are here
Holidays are here
But no one else is around
Lonely mistletoe...
:(
Lonely mistletoe
Snow on the wooden doorjamb
No one has come home
No one has come home
Perhaps I'll warm myself up
Inviting fireplace
Hi Missc! Nice Haikus - you were ambitious!
Inviting fireplace
Seekers huddle near the blaze
Lights brighten faces
Bye....Missc.... have to go eat dinner now - it's hi and goodbye unfortunately.
S'okay. Now I don't seem so crazy. I was really just bored. I've been on FOREVER...~exasperation~But hi all the same Janine!:wave:
Lights brighten faces
Lips tinged blue by dear Jack Frost
Not nipping by far....
Hi Missc - you are not crazy. I wrote a bunch of H's one night when no one else came on. I just had to keep playing - good tension relief. Now you probably went away. We keep missing each other. I jump in every so often between stuff I am doing too dull to mention.
Here's my new Haiku -
Not nipping by far....
Snowflakes bite my frozen ears
Muffs left on the desk
Muffs left on the desk
Do me little good today.
Slushing through the snow.
Hi Virgil :wave:
Slushing through the snow
My golashes swirl the white flakes
Painted with sparkles
Hi Janine. Nice.
Painted with sparkles
Teach says mommy will love it.
Happy Mother's Day.
Hi, thanks. How is Antony and Cleo debates/discussions going? I checked the thread, but seemed to stop dead, two days ago. Is everyone reading Act III?
Happy Mother's Day
Christ is born, Madonna's joy
Stars in wonder shine.
Turned it into Christmas Haiku....:D
Oh that was a cute poem of yours! Reminds me of gifts I got from my son when he was small.
Yeah, I been stood up. What happened to all that were interested?:(Quote:
Originally Posted by Janine
Good job!Quote:
Happy Mother's Day
Christ is born, Madonna's joy
Worlds in wonder know.
Turned it into Christmas Haiku....:D
Worlds in wonder know
how to extract life from rock.
Life is a wild ride.
:sick: Yuck.
Life is a wild ride - yuck :sick: ?
Too funny....:lol:
Life is a wild ride
Super cool places to explore
Yes, it is a trip!
How is that for campy?:lol:
I see you were stood up in A&C:bawling: Do you have BO or something?:lol:
Who knows. :)Quote:
Originally Posted by Janine
Yes it is a trip!
Riding in the back seat of
Dad's '50 chevy.
Dad's '50 chevy,
Cruising down this black highway -
Careless as the wind!
Nice one!
Careless as the wind
the boy stumbles down the stairs.
Ask Mom for some help.
Time for bed. I'm brain dead. Good night Janine.
Nite, I am brain dead too.
Ask Mom for some help.
She lives for you, devoted,
Love in hand and heart.
Love in hand and heart
Somehow, we struggle through these
Flurries of hardship.
Nice ShoutGrace! How are you tonight?
Flurries of hardship
Grasp we at outward supports
We stop from falling
We stop from falling
Through our chasms or self doubt;
We find our own way.
Ack! I saw you were on and was waiting for you to Haiku . . . I don't know how I missed it. :( I'm doing well . . . hope you get back on!Quote:
Originally Posted by Janine
We find our own way
Crawling past the sticky and
Cold impediments.