Loved your haiku, too. Hey, you can keep calling me beautiful. I kind of like it anway. You have spoiled me now. Your hair is stunning, dearest girl. Go get that cute Santa M!
Either is pretty
Skin color makes no difference
All people have beauty
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Loved your haiku, too. Hey, you can keep calling me beautiful. I kind of like it anway. You have spoiled me now. Your hair is stunning, dearest girl. Go get that cute Santa M!
Either is pretty
Skin color makes no difference
All people have beauty
All people have beauty,
But do all have a good heart?
Why then is hell packed?
Hi Virgil, I see you are reading Dante again....
Why then is hell packed?
Souls long lost from this world, they
Blacken not earth's light
Blacken not earth's light
With full moons ecliptical
Sea green shadowed night
Sea green shadowed night
Fish copy other fish trails
Waves brightly pulsing
Waves brightly pulsing
Gentle sands shifting, satin shores
Glow with aqua stain
Playing Haiku all alone - where is everyone tonight. Well, I got on a roll and wrote a bunch! Playing Haiku solitare, I guess. :)
Glow with aqua stain
Fantasies swimming
In my iron heart
(you are not alone now! :D)
In my iron heart
of hearts, there lies another
iron heart I guard.
iron heart I guard
why guard that which is iron
overprotected
overprotected
garden strains to rise above,
hollyhocks perform
hollyhocks perform
their measureless minuet
dancing in silence
Good morning/evening beautiful Miss Janine! I'll spoil you rotten, I won't stop, don't worry..:p Though Santa M loves girls with long hair, this long-haired girl is not taking advantage of it. We're better off for now as friends. ;)Quote:
Originally Posted by Janine
Can we not talk about him now? It just makes my heart beat thrice as fast...not healthy anymore..;) :D
Dancing in silence
Doing the salsa and jazz.
The guy dips the girl.....
Hello there, Mr. Whiff! :wave:
The guy dips the girl...
Uncomfortable silence,
Then their lips will meet...
Then their lips will meet...
Eternity together...
Part...and meet again.
Part...and meet again.
Only eyes still familiar
Bottled expression
bottled expression,
stuck 'till rigorously slapped
mutely floods the page.
mutely floods the page
drowning the jazzy crier,
the bourbon street times.
I got to say, the last month or two we have gathered together the best haiku "players" since I've been on lit net.
The Bourbon Street times
are filled with carnival jerks.
Dixieland music.
What a nice compliment Virgil...gee am I included? I just got started with Haiku. I used to read a lot of it when I was younger....maybe some of it stuck!
Here's my Haiku ~
Dixieland music
Jazz bars swirl with dancing smoke
New Orleans alive!
Of course you're included. Did you see Logos' post on getting your sketch larger? Why not just post it somewhere and then have a link in your signature to it?Quote:
Originally Posted by Janine
New Orleans alive
With fat Tuesday revelry.
Ash Wednesday ends it.
Ash Wednesday ends it
except for that one year we
gave it up for lent
Yes, well we have discussed it extensively. Now I see it can't be any higher - which is a bummer. But I will just paste it into the body of the text in each posting when it gets closer to Christmas. Will be a little more work but it will work out ok...you will see. I won't make it too much larger really. After Christmas I will make up a blog for artwork. It should be fun. I had better go to the Introduce Yourself thread when I find time and introduce myself...that might be nice. Just no time now to do all of this. Went Christmas shopping tonight but mostly done with that now. Thank heaven!Quote:
Originally Posted by Virgil
Here's my Haiku ~
Gave it up for lent
Eating yummy chocolate bars
Lusted for caffine
That is a pretty silly one. I am tired....:sick:
Think I spelled caffine wrong...oh well.... :(
Lusted for caffeine,
for twenty minutes or less,
then slept the urge off.
Then slept the urge off
Woke up at midnight for drink
The devils sang songs
The devils sang songs
In the moonlite ancient woods
Whirlwind of witches
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Whirlwind of witches
Dance impassioned in night's fire
World's wild with folly
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Happy Holidays everyone. Love and peace to all of you! ~ Janine
Whirlwind of witches
Smells the burning of their kind
They start their ballet
Hello, Janine! http://www.clicksmilies.com/s1106/hu...smiley-011.gif
Hi Toni....that little guy is really funny and weird...where did you find him? I posted my photo larger and it worked. I have been experimenting with it and glad I could get the card in for the holidays. Do you like it. I drew it about 15 yrs ago. I guess it prompted you to use your last line in your Haiku ~
They start their ballet
So wonderous to behold
Motion stills the crowd
I have to bail out now. I am falling asleep. It is 2:08 here in America EST. I am so tired out I can't keep my eyes open any longer. See you tomorrow! J
The smiley is from Uncle Pen's Smileys..Quote:
Originally Posted by Janine
And yes! I love your drawing! I draw too, sometimes. Using watercolor pencils. I'm wondering, is your drawing on pencil or charcoal?
Aaannd, Im messing up the Haiku again. My apologies, madame.:bawling:
Motion stills the crowd
Dancers moved by hate and lies
I fall in your arms
And oh..
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I fall in your arms
vulnerable and willing,
gently lay me down
Gently lay me down
In my pooling blood . . . Don't cry,
You'll forget me soon.
You'll forget me soon
See, you do not know my name,
So soon forgotten
So soon forgotten
History is fickle, and
Nothing is sacred.
Nothing is sacred
Neither book nor artefact
contains the godhead
Contains the godhead.
Poems, poets - creative.
They're inspirations..
http://www.websmileys.com/sm/cool/049.gif <<< This is how cool your drawing is, Janine! I could do that "rock finger sign" for it.
They're inspirations
The moths keep on fluttering
Fighting for the flame
fighting for flames
i kiss the lovely creature
necissary(sp) foresight