foggy once again
blurry, and cant see the path
trip and fall, face first
very clever :)
as far as the quote, its an "unknown author" one; although i've had many debates over its origins, no one can conclusively claim it.
Printable View
foggy once again
blurry, and cant see the path
trip and fall, face first
very clever :)
as far as the quote, its an "unknown author" one; although i've had many debates over its origins, no one can conclusively claim it.
Foggy once again
Breathless. Mist yields to pine tips
On the distant shore.
:) hey verybaddmom, you beat me to it!
trip and fall, face first
across slippery driftwood
into the cold lake
hehe no worries Riesa, both your haiku were very good :D
into the cold lake
throw worries and cares, let go
let them sink in deep
let them sink in deep
settle down with the leeches
worries, cares--suck, too
Thanks, verybaddmom! I like yours too. :nod:
Worry, Cares--suck too.
Take your clue from clear shallows
And empty your mind.
and empty your mind
out! false assumptions, and guilt
learn new ways to live
Learn new ways to live
And change your outlook of life
Let us start anew
Let us start anew
leave your crimes and deep regrets
at New Years coat check
At New Year's coat check
the falling baloons, the lost
ticket, the sad dream
Actually all the last few players here are outstanding; I hope I'm keeping up with you all. It's been a while since I've attempted poetry.
Virgil, if I'm one of the players you refer to, Thanks. don't worry about keeping up, all you gotta do is just keep posting!
Ticket, the sad dream
Wake, but for the ghost of you
The room is empty.
The room is empty
No one is here, in this house.
Set the mouse aside
set the mouse aside
the rooster and the eagle
prance and sing and hunt
prance and sing and hunt
fallow field, hunger gnaws, sharp eye
Catches the viper