Could we please keep this to haiku. I'd write this in PMs, but there are too many who seem to forget that this is a haiku thread, and they can discuss things by PM.
Wonderful pagans
that turn palms open to life,
let the rain god pour.
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Could we please keep this to haiku. I'd write this in PMs, but there are too many who seem to forget that this is a haiku thread, and they can discuss things by PM.
Wonderful pagans
that turn palms open to life,
let the rain god pour.
My sentiments exactly Il Penseoroso!
Let the rain god pour
cleanse Gaia's withering soul
Wash away the stain
Wash away the stain
Sweat-soaked saris in the wind
Calloused hands hide all
calloused hands hide all,
protecting Life's own beauty
from this world's malice
From this world's malice
Spring the demons of chaos
Shattering order
Shattering order
Fragmented thinking controlled
Nineteen Eighty Four
Nineteen Eighty Four
Hide your thoughts from ev'ryone
The picture's eyes move...
hi Drame! :wave:
The picture's eyes move
to circumspect in boredom,
wishing for a change.
wishing for a change
dust descends through mornings rays
change is eternal
hey MC!
Wishing for a change
Begging shooting stars in vain
Luck has no place here
Erm... which one do I go from?
You combine the 2:Quote:
Originally Posted by Misscaroline
Change is Eternal
Success and Failure involve work
Luck has no place here
w00t kilted! All hail kilted, all mighty fixer of simultaneous replies!
Luck has no place here
You cannot guess who will win
Spin the roulette wheel
Spin the roulette wheel
cause each place to flicker by
the choosing arrow.
The choosing arrow
The archer draws the bow taut
He has made his choice
he has made his choice.
walking toward the ringing phone,
a smile lights his eyes.
A smile lights his eyes
The arrow flew true to the heart
Aim- let the string loose
dang beat out by MC
Sorry!... Really am sorry. I liked that one, so it got doen really fast...
merriment and style
adorn her enticing soul -
irresistible
ahhh the broken haiku i will try to fix...Susan the thread is haiku, and i really like yours, but you should take the last line of the person before you and use it in the begining of yours so without further ado
Aim let loose the string
sweet music emanates thus
merriment and style
to which yours follows
merriment and style
adorn her enticing soul
irresistible
Irresistible
The soft touch of a lover
When your heart beats sound
at the risk of receiving more chastisement (this time for writing a PM on a haiku chain...someone was reprimanded earlier for this), I want to defend myself against the last chastisement... (:
I understand how the chain works and adhere to the rules. 2 people had posted haiku using my last line 'a smile lights his eyes'. I posted according to the final one, as dictated by martial haiku law. (truly, I am smiling...no great offense taken!) I came back a few minutes ago and found the note asking me to follow the rules. I did. The ku that I followed has been deleted, though. Thus, I am left with no evidence. I apologize.
Tis fine Susan. Nothing to be ashamed of. All is forgiven (even if I speak out of my forum turn, I will defend you and know exactly how it feels to respond to a ku that no longer exists...)
All is well, Susan!
When your heart beats loud
each nook and corner warmed
by that sense of life.
By that sense of life
Quality of it was shaped
By crystal fingers
By crystal fingers
cascading brilliant light
reinvigorate
reinvigorate
lemon scented soap and fizz
foretells fadeing cares
Foretells fading cares
And laminated losses
Paints with black and white
Paints white with black
The innocence amazes
Children sit wide eyed
Children sit wide-eyed
See a couple making love
In quiet corner.
In a quiet corner
sheeted lovers, one, entwined
candle wax burned down
Candle wax burned down
The night is almost over
Neither wants to leave
(Btw, Robin, O.O O.O O.O....)
neither wants to leave
memories like the fadeing light
all is swept away
all is swept away...
hope, dreams, faith - victims of Fate's
fickle, changing moods
Fickle changing moods
swift to sink the climbing soul
like night at noon hour.
like night at noon hour
arrival and departure
the gladiators
The gladiators
submitting to no nature
slay their beastial prey.
Slay their beastial prey
Utter words of pain and grief
Gluttons of the night
Great poems/haiku on this page, 403. You guys were really on a role! Nice flow of ideas....
gluttons of the night
engorged, yea blackened egos
feast upon pure hearts