Unbalanced nurture
Freezed discipline is the worst
Haiku is so hard.
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ok, that was the worst haiku I've ever written.
Can we make the haiku romantic or morbid?
I find that I am more effective on both..:D
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Unbalanced nurture
Freezed discipline is the worst
Haiku is so hard.
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ok, that was the worst haiku I've ever written.
Can we make the haiku romantic or morbid?
I find that I am more effective on both..:D
Haiku is so hard
One, two, three, four,five,six....seven
Evil syllables
Evil syllables
Forcing lore to twist and turn
The twisted logic
Ooo nice one!
The twisted logic
Dystopia unnoticed
Ignorance cherished
Yours is very good too! As usual.:D
Ignorance cherished
Killing your sins, hopes and dreams
Morpheus is happy
Morpheus is happy
When dragons and creatures live.
Such is quite a charm.
Such is quite a charm
The fragile antique in hand
Of days now preserved
Some lovely haiku on this page - hats off to all of you!
such is quite a charm,
eyes filled with child-like enchantment
watching faeries dance
Watching fairies dance
Overwhelms me with gladness!
Don't you kill them, dork.
Hello Janine! Nice seeing you here now! :wave:
Don't you kill them, dork.
They'll come back to get revenge
Trust me, they're evil
That's from my friend Samercury, who hasn't been by much lately.
Trust me, they're evil,
Those raucus dwarfs from down south.
One has to repell.
=_=
One has to repell.
For as long as possible
Their frightful attacks
wow, like old times, Virg, Samer, and Riesa all in a row. :wave:
their frightful attacks
make me feel punch-drunk with glee
the impious imps
the impious imps
clown in confederacies
floral carnivals.
Floral carnivals,
three rings of plant life dancing.
A rose ringleader.
yep
A rose ringleader
From the grey flower garden
Round and round we go
Round and round we go
Where we stop only God knows.
That was all, just life.
That was all, just life,
a single revolution
from grace to the fall.
from grace to the fall
so close to being one more
jeff buckley haiku
jeff buckley haiku
on banks of singing rivers
flip down waterfalls
Flip down waterfalls
Like burgers at McDonald's
Up and sown, sideways
Up and down, sideways,
the stone-skipping rivulets
express their nature.
Express their nature
The lamb, the wolf, cunning fox
Small, weak, broken branch
Express their nature
The Celtic dancers spun life
Like glee of sun threads
wow janine, that was brilliant!!
Like glee of sun threads
Celestial patterns of sky
Windy paintbrushes
the PAM and the PAPAM's haiku are both Bloody Brilliant! :thumbs_up:
Windy paintbrushes
Cursed red paint of ribboned sin,
She wanted to die
She wanted to die
Foiled by her former friend,
THE VIGILANTE.
The VIGILANTE
Forced to act against his will
Like a torn puppet
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It doesn't make any sense, does it?:(
Like a torn puppet
Connor jerks, hops, and lunges
He's trying to dance.
He's trying to dance
Just waiting for his lady love
The clock strikes midnight
The clock strikes midnight
David in his lonely cell
Thinking about Eve.
Thinking about Eve
David stirs, mumbles, in his sleep
Longing to hold her
Longing to hold her,
Awakens to her scream, and
The wrong kind of guilt.
The wrong kind of guilt
Pierces, like earth pushed to hell
He wants to revenge
He wants to revenge,
Fallen German pilot is
Angry, but humbled.
Angry but humbled,
The pilot wants to feed on
Wreckages of dreams
I just love literary allusions. And thoroughly flattered that you've read my work. :blush:
Wreckages of dreams
Of glory in sky battle
They're burning away...
No biggie. Actually, it is a pleasure to read your work.. im a big fan.:thumbs_up *rushes to get pen and paper to get Robin's autograph*Quote:
Originally Posted by RobinHood3000
They're burning away
Stardusts from comets and dreams
Let me bid farewell
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i really have to go, -eat dinner. Lain's getting mad..
pleasure Haikuing with ya, mate..:D
"Let me bid farewell!"
Cries David in his dreams, but
Too late - she has gone...