Tries to blink away
But the slime and mud of time
Will not be denied.
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Tries to blink away
But the slime and mud of time
Will not be denied.
I truly am Shoutgrace's biggest Haiku fan
This for ya.:thumbs_up :D
Will not be denied
Of freedom from slavery
I am shouting grace..
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hihi:)
Janine-I thought this was a great line. :)Quote:
Swords sharpened gnawing sharks teeth
toni-I have to agree with you, shoutgrace's haikus are exceptional.
I am shouting grace
sings the slave trader in
his amazing grace.
Hmm...and that gave me an idea! we could start a Shoutgrace fan-club!:)
His amazing grace
A story long never told
Once Upon A Time
Once upon a time
frozen in knightly glory
a damsel was fleeced.
Hello, Il Penseroso :wave: Nice avatar, by the way..:)
A damsel was fleeced
She was forced into the night
She was the Fallen
Hey toni, thanks. I likewise dig yours.
She was the fallen,
and he the treacherous stair
that could not support.
Thanks. Wanna trade? *joking*:)
That could not support
A thousand of quiet screams
The gremlins trembled
Eh, I'm good. :)
The gremlins trembled
their eyes glistening in view
of humorless men.
Of humorless men
There are many here today
I hope they don't stay
Pretty silly, eh?
I hope they dont stay
Mud tracked with hostess grimace
Time to poison drinks
not as silly as mine!
Time to poison drinks
Bleeds all of the blood of life
Sucked dry of all emotion
5
7
5
:D
you'll get it. at least your words are pure. :)
bleeds the blood of life
my emotional salvage
kept for reflection.
I think another fanclub is in order.Quote:
Originally Posted by Il Penseroso
that's so dignified and dark, love it. :thumbs_up
Kept for reflection
The glistening clear pond where
Narcissus once drowned.
okay, another fan club. that's great. PL. (btw-how's that poem coming along?)
narcissus once drowned
age curbing emolients
embodied his ruin
Great h, love the stair reference - terrific! I liked yours too Riesa - very much - the one before this post, with my closing line starting yours. Wonderful!Quote:
Originally Posted by Riesa
I changed my second line in that h - I counted, too, but math is not my strong point :( .I will get it right soon, the poem sounded better before, I think, but was not correct form...dern it...
embodied his ruin
the beach to the stranded whale
surf to sand prison
surf to sand prison
starts one's hike up Everest.
Must trek to thin air.
Must trek to thin air
Boots weighted by snow and pain
The summit is clear!
Il Penseroso has a way of dignifying my mediocre haiku..:lol:Quote:
Originally Posted by Riesa
Love this site - it is so much fun! But I have to go for the night. I am fading away....See all tomorrow! J
Good night, Janine! May choirs of poetic rock angles sing thee to sleep...:)
the summit is clear
White rain slash thy wasting skin
And I say-Goodbye
lol lol lol lol ~ :lol: Thanks Toni, I Love that ....very Hamletish! ...And yet I am still up and it is 1:34! What am I thinking? Soon the choirs of poetic rock angels will drag me to bed.... appropriate haiku for certain, at least last line....now my first line....Quote:
Originally Posted by toni
And I say-Goodbye
To all my tired confusions
Soon time will be day
Soon time will be day
Clammy digits tug the chord
Flat ECG line
Flat ECG line
cold sings morbid lullabys
It's not bad at all
It's not bad at all
the passing years will show us
how to laugh again
It's not bad at all
Now I found your pretty face
I want to hold you...
Hiya Oz! :)
Aaack posted at the same time!
Next haiku-er follow reisa's last line- Mine's usually flat anyways..:)
I want to hold you
and teach your aged innocence
how to laugh again.
how to laugh again
to give wisdom to the lines
like sad long ago
Like sad long ago
that dwells by no firelight
of rememberance.
Burn and rage away
Time will stalk the blazen sky
Ember of a day
whoops! Sorry not sure what happened?
:wave: Hi Janine. Did you follow all those messages?
Ember of the day
passes into late evening.
Whisper for me now.
Hi Virgil......Well, sort of understood them.......but the thing was I had to go out so I had to read them quickly. Now I am tired and overwhelmed with so many messages in my PM tonight. Too tired out to answer them all now.
That's ok. Not much to say. :)
I really want to watch a movie and relax. Did you get the gist of them and do you agree with the moderators on the question?
Here's my Haiku.....gang.....sorry to keep you waiting
Of rememberance
Fog of day long and tiresome
Memory broke through