Oops a tie; I like yours better just mercedes, we should proceed from there.
snow on pine needles
edge of lace on winter's cloak
dazzling crystal drops
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Oops a tie; I like yours better just mercedes, we should proceed from there.
snow on pine needles
edge of lace on winter's cloak
dazzling crystal drops
dazzling crystal drops
frozen moments in time
sorry, i left out one syllable
Plus Lynne, you did what I do all the time; I mix up Haiku's. This is 'three person haiku.'Quote:
Originally Posted by Lynne50
dazzling crystal drops
the frozen moments in time
marvels of nature.
We really like that line 'dazzling crystal drops'! hahaha...now we have two completed haiku's with my brilliant line...haha..I liked the last finished haiku a lot; very pretty!
new line:
poetic moment
poetic moment
fateful time for soul-searching
poetic moment
fateful time for soul-searching
a chance to find self.
stress the boundary
stress the boundary
the taunt line of sanity
stress the boundary
the taut line of sanity
have had enough fun.
surreal amusements
surreal amusements
splendid etheral pursuits
:lol: Loved it! :thumbs_upQuote:
Originally Posted by Haunted
Surreal amusements
splendid etheral pursuits
who lights cigarettes ...
;) [couldn't resist...]
I will smoke to it!