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and bliss
must be sought out
one man's heaven, another's hell--
enjoy everything to fullness...
death comes

death comes
wrapped in black dress
carrying a black whip in hand
lashing!

Lashing
Out like a whip.
Slavery is no more.
And I hope it'll never arise
Again.

again
I come to you
coveting your blessing
you can make me new, it's your new
power

power
stretches across
the land with great steel arms
linked, defending soldiers protect
our homes

our homes
once paradise
are swept away by storms
risen in the Bay of Bengal
Oh, sad!

oh sad
distance, time/space,
we must be there, a place
where, face to face, amazed,
we touch

we touch,
the magic's there
time has not erased love
Sown grey in our hair, not our hearts
my love...

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Originally Posted by firefangled

oh sad
distance, time/space,
we must be there, a place
where, face to face, amazed,
we touch

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we touch
like petals two
kissing one another's
lips, oblivious of all around
and melt

my love...
how should I say
i live only by you
by the ecstasy of your feel
your love

your love
of life through words
touches my heart and soul
so that in my mind I am there
with you

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Originally Posted by ampoule

your love
of life through words
touches my heart and soul
so that in my mind I am there
with you

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this is superb ! almost a precise of my earlier poem

with you
i vow to live
like a cotyledon
of deep consolidated love
sprouting

sprouting
like flowers in
the garden of eden
make sure to be aware of the
serpent

serpent
please don't bite me
oh, a nibble perhaps
be sure to leave some of my flesh
for him

for him
wait these two eyes
even after I'm dea;l
eat every thing of me,O serpent
but eyes!