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Shadow runs alone -
Like the trickle of blood that
Blinds my angry eyes.

Blinds my angry eyes
Of destructive metaphors
Waste of hard, dry shame..

:)

Waste of hard, dry shame
A fount of expenditure
Shows the folly done.

Hi toni! :wave: :D

Shows the folly done,
Puzzles, science left unsolved
Left in blank mazes..

Hi Shoutgrace!:) :) :)

left in blank mazes
similair to life I live
conundrum of pain

Conundrum of pain
Important, to keep you sane,
At least for a while

At least for a while
Mickey Mouse and that Hamlet
Hung out together.

hung out together
like old-time washer women
pinning flapping sheets

pinning flapping sheets
on a windy day is like
sailing sideways left

sailing sideways left
may bring you full about, but
most boats prefer South

Most boats prefer south
Yet mine in dangerous seas
Catches bigger fish

hmm. I seem to always like your haiku, drama.

catches bigger fish
than me-yet doesn't like to
gut, cook, or eat them

Gut, cook, or eat them
When they start annoying you
Siblings can be tough.

Siblings can be tough,
Oh yeah tell me about it...
always running 'round..

Hi shoutgrace:):):):)

Hello there toni. :D :banana:

Always running 'round
Jumping through posts, threads, titles
Just to see a friend.

Just to see a friend
Braving limp fingers, mouse-ing
Everthing's worthwhile..

_____

I am terrible at HAIKU today...:)

Not as bad as me. ;)

Everything's worthwhile
When you find you are nearing
What you thought was dear.

What d'you mean? I think you're the best!:)

What you thought was dear
Now stings memories, old,new
spinning into void..

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Now that is just terrible..

Spinning into void..
Yarns nibbles through ragged skin
Eyes strung out to fade

And thanks Riesa! i really like yours too, that last one was really clever.:D

Eyes strung out to fade
after too many whiskies.
Let's go to bed now.

Lets go to bed now
Don't think of it like that, its
Just a bed, Caddy. ;)

Just a bed, Caddy
No wishing tongues and whispers
Of sins, innocence

Of sins, innocence
Hatred swamps my mind
I dont like sex

Yecchhs...

I don't like sex.
But if you're talking gender,
I think not at all

Hello there, UbiquitousPrat! Welcome to the forum! I have yet to know you but I honestly think you are not a prat. Seriously. :)

I think not at all
Perhaps, only of playin chicken on the district line
They come whilst you sleep



Laindessiel, thanks, i think anyway. I see I dont like sex had the effect i was hoping for ;)

Funny you think you are. ;) Well, I think of myself as a realist, sometimes lost, sometimes found (or sane). :D

The "S" word...creeps me out, dude. Or dudette. Which are you?


They come whilst you sleep
Haunting ghosts, playing checkers
And you don't waken


Pardon the Haiku. I am not the best in here. My sis is one of, though. Toni right there.

And by the way, a Haiku consists of
5 syllables on the first line
7 syllables on the second
5 again in the third. :)

Oh Geez. I don't think I am good at all. But you know, trying to be...:)

And you don't waken
After a thousand great sighs
I would cry dark tears...

I would cry dark tears
If you packed your bag tonight.
So deal or no deal?

So deal or no deal
Deal, would go on seeing him
No deal I would leave

___
It doesn't make any sense at all, does it?:)

So deal or no deal
Deal, would go on seeing him
No deal I would leave

___
It doesn't make any sense at all, does it?:alien: :(

Oh Geez, why can't we ever delete a double post? Now it is a triple post...

No deal I would leave
Winter soltice to receive
Blossoms in the spring

Blossoms in the spring
Everything in the season
Shrilly shrieks romance

Shrilly shrieks romance
intoxicating frangrance
makes my knees feel weak

Looks like we have a new face here at the HAIKU thread!
Welcome to lItnet, jackthomas! :) Congratulations on your first post!:)

Makes my knees feel weak
Black hatred fill thy scorned lips
Struggling to break free

that's 6 syl on the last line toni i think. i could b wrong

Not if it's like this:

Strugg'ling to break free
Woman chained to the stone bricks
Subject to his will. :brow:

No, it is 5.

Strug- 1
Ling- 2
To- 3
Break- 4
Free- 5

Hi there!

Struggling to break free
From the sad ghosts of my past
Flailing from a thread

Arrrr, Rob!

Merriam-Webster's confirms that "struggling" is but two syllables.