The finish line looms--
Don't yell at me, I know where
I'm going... I think
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The finish line looms--
Don't yell at me, I know where
I'm going... I think
Oh I am truly sorry, Dramasnot!!!! :( :(Quote:
Originally Posted by dramasnot6
I don't know what's gotten into me at that time but I seriously counted it to have 7 syllables!! I admit I messed up. Oh, geez, man, I am so sorry...
Don't worry, I DO know how to speak. :thumbs_up
And yes, please take pride in your Haiku abilities. It is highly laudable. :)
Peace?
I'm going...I think
Where gods and beasts live and die...
"Die", such a long word....
oh im sorry i got all evil there....i just re-read my post and it was very irrational. very sorry...but my poems are like my children, as sad as that is. but thank you sincerely. mucho peace.
"Die", such a long word....
Brief upon lips, yet in hearts
Infinity reins
Infinity reigns,
Completely overwhelming
Smaller niceties.
Smaller niceties:
Hungry for bigger favors
Not enough, Love says
Not enough, Love says,
propping open the closing
doors of indifference.
doors of indifference
like trees clap color's last call,
winter closes them
Winter closes them
Knitting memories of past
Crawling one by one
Crawling one by one
We inch toward the guillotine
Eager for the end.
Eager for the end
To see the new horizon
Lying in a haze
Lying in a haze
Of sated lust and faded
Thoughts of what we were.
Thoughts of what we were
Whirling in a dark malice
Veiled with lies, deceit.
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That's sad!
Yes it is. ;)
Veiled with lies, deceit -
Our selfish, brilliant dance,
Preserved by our fear.
Preserved by our fear
I smell your sins and blunders
Please do, set me free
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Now that was really sad!
Please do, set me free
This was not part of the deal
Mascara eyes run
WOW!! those last few haikus are amazing. well done!!!
Mascara eyes run
Pupils cower behind glass
Tainted waterfall
Tainted waterfall
debris of deceit and pain
flood their banks with hurt
Good, one, dear OZ.
Flood their banks of hurt
My stained fantsy crouches,
and poised quick to strike
And poised quick to strike
Were storms looming on pure life.
Evil is at hand.
Evil is at hand
There a sex offender lose
He has a hardon
he has a hard on,
a gun, a bottle of Jack-
Welcome to Texas.
Welcome to Texas
A harmless nature slumbers
Shotguns have a laugh
shotguns have a laugh
between Cheney's buddies what's
a hole in the head
hehe, i love urs dcdavi:lol: sad yet true
A hole in the head
Thoughts straining to be set free
Porous redemption
Porous redemption
Slowly inching my way to
never ending dream
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* Inviting ShoutGrace!*
It has been fun reading you.
Thanks
Never ending dream
With eyelids, world closes off
Pupil of the mind
Pupil of the mind
Water gushes out of it
Leaving me in daze
Leaving me in daze
Ravenous vertigo chews
Spits out dark circles
that was awesome!!:thumbs_upQuote:
Originally Posted by Riesa
Spits out dark circles
an abyss of nothingness
a black hole of fear
A black hole of fear
As she steps to the edge of
The long diving board.
The long diving board
Taking my little death march,
Chorus starts to play
Chorus starts to play
Hummingbirds dive into tune
Verdent ovation
i loved your short story toni! esp "The dark forest wiggled", that imagery just struck me. your poem "paralell" had a beautiful use of language too. well done!
oh..and i too have a thing for cedric driggory ...;) :p
hehehe....keep up the good work!
Verdant ovation -
Vegetables and garden things
Acclaim the wise mind.
Thanks for taking time to read my story, Dramasnot! It is just the first part, there is more to come. I haven't just gotten around to typing it.. :PQuote:
Originally Posted by dramasnot6
Ooohh, so you like Cedric too eh?:thumbs_up :D It is just too bad he wont be in the fifth movie!!:bawling:
For the HAIKU:
Acclaim the wise mind,
Of forgotten symphonies
Old and new reborn
old and new reborn
Of love, and life, and dreamers
was i ever seen?
I think I'm gonna be the first one to welcome you, inmyownworld! I saw you registering just 5 mins. ago. Welcome to LitNet! You'll enjoy it here, I swear.
Was I ever seen
Hiding behind the dry leaves
Panting for bullets?
Panting for bullets
Crying in vain for sanity
Shadow runs alone..