i like i like i like!Quote:
Originally Posted by ktd222
(ok so it's not a haiku... but had to comment)
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i like i like i like!Quote:
Originally Posted by ktd222
(ok so it's not a haiku... but had to comment)
an apple a day
is great; but a pineapple
rots my teeth away!
Mo, the first line of your haiku has to lead off with the last line of the previous poster's haiku.
rots my teeth away
sunsets sweet smile opens eye
eternal compost
eternal compost
decomposing, nourishing.
the circle of life
the circle of life
sometimes doesn't reach its tail.
Then the sun goes dark.
then the sun goes dark
as the last humans watch through
embedded eye-pods.
have fun with that one, next person. :D
Embedded eye-pods
Floating about in blue slime
Very odd Sci-fi.
very odd sci-fi
is what he likes most of all
he is a strange man
he is a strange man.
but i think daily of him,
awake from heartache...
awake from heartache,
slip to sleep from desire
to dream of dreaming
to dream of dreaming,
seeing with eyes unclouded,
my faith unshaken
my faith unshaken
by hurtful words sees smiles and
still staggers sometimes
Very odd sci-fi
Can not spoil this, our first date.
"Aren't you frightened?"
(rats, i read the wrong page)
Still staggers sometimes
Under the weight of past love,
Can't fight the feeling.
Can't fight the feeling
Of melancholy so deep
Although I try hard.
Although I try hard
I cannot become happy
Just more and more sad.
Just more and more sad,
The drooping tree seems to be
As winter comes fast.
As winter comes fast
The worms start crawlling inside
My hollow dead trunk.
My hollow dead trunk
And all my crisp, falling leaves
Make a great season.
Hi Riesa, I'm back.:wave:Quote:
Originally Posted by Riesa
Make a great season
if your baseball team wins games.
Then the world series.
hey V. How was your trip?
then the world series
concerns the world less then
Paris Hilton's lips.
:p
Fine thank you. I'll post a few pictures when I develop some film.Quote:
Originally Posted by Riesa
But I'm not doing a haiku on Paris Hilton's lips. :lol: :lol: I may get myself in trouble with the sensers. :D
oh come now. a little naughty haiku is all right isn't it? Just don't insult someone's religion.
Paris Hilton's lips
can stir the imagination.
Oh lewd fantasies.
:D :p
Heehee...my turn. :D
Oh, lewd fantasies
Fill adolescent boys' minds
Fun is had by all. :brow:
fun is had by all
when wicked dreaming becomes
a sultry embrace.
whew that was difficult for some reason.
Very odd Sci-fi.
The Dark Knight and strange events
Unsolved mystery
Unsolved mystery:
which came first, the chicken or
the egg? Anyone?
The egg? Anyone?
Did you find the egg I dropped
Upon the sidewalk.
Upon the sidewalk
I found a new born rodent.
XY, I named him.
Im new here and im going to try this out. im not very good at huiku's but i will definatily try
XY I named him
oh so sad, so lonely
left out in the cold
not bad, just remember we try to stick to the
5
7
5
syllable rule, you almost had it.
:D Welcome to the forum.
left out in the cold
only needing a cozy
"it'll be all right,"
oh. whoops. im not very good at that. i had to do it for an assignment for class. thx.
"it'll be alright,"
whispered ktd222
"there's no cold tonight,"
Welcome femalemind. You're getting the hang of it.
there's no cold tonight.
Abandoned child will survive.
The preist takes her in.
The priest takes her in
And, in disbelief, she thanks
His faithful kindness.
his faithful kindness
soothes, but he lacks realism,
she's deeper than that
She's deeper than that
Skin of hers. She's got muscle
Underneath it all.
she's deeper than that,
teetering between silent
darkness and wellsprings
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Hey everybody! I feel excited and nervous and shy at being a newbie, but I'm looking forward to having a lot of fun here. I think the best thing about joining a forum is the great exchange of ideas that happens, and I think that's a really great thing for people like me who love to read and write stuff. :D :D