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one sparrow makes spring
a sparrow makes spring
two sparrows bring hail and rain
a sparrow makes spring
dance in perfect unison
a sparrow makes springQuote:
Originally Posted by mazHur
two sparrows bring hail and rain
three sparrows turmoil
maz, can you finish mine? You are so good at this.
a sparrow makes springQuote:
Originally Posted by Janine
dance in perfect unison
singing to love's tune.;)
Very nice - thanks!
peacock's feather eyes
peacock's feather eyes
dollar coins spread all over
peacock's feather eyes
dollar coins spread all over
are they heads or tails?
I know that song well and I think I know the next lines..."then you might as well take the sun away, all the birds that flew in the summer sky, when our love was new and our hearts were high" - wow, surprised I remembered that.:) Been a long time since I heard it...good song!Quote:
Originally Posted by mazHur
hahaha...isn't that they other Haiku theme? I have to go and eat dinner. It must be late there.Quote:
If you will leave there will be 2 persons short and me alone ,,, How will a sparrow make spring!;)
Ok, to present haiku.....
peacock's feather eyes
dollar coins spread all over
shimm'ring shadows glow
oops, sorry mercedes, I was 3 sec's too late. Anyway, I love yours best!Quote:
Originally Posted by just mercedes
I will use my last line as my first now.
Shimm'ry shadows glow
Shimm'ry shadows glow
winter moon breaks through grey cloud
Shimm'ry shadows glow
winter moon breaks through grey cloud
surrounded by stars
nice shift of focus!
nice shift of focus!
mind has left heart has entered