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Originally Posted by kiz_paws
Love this one, Kiz.
Wish I'd written it.
:)
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Quote:
Originally Posted by kiz_paws
Love this one, Kiz.
Wish I'd written it.
:)
Same with me. I'm often awed with the wonderful imagery I find on these threads.Quote:
Originally Posted by CdnReader
kiz, thanks for your nice comment. :)
Images of rare beauty
meaningful, surprising, amazing, breathtaking.
Thanks so very much, cdn and barbara. :blush: Your compliments go a long way, really. :nod:
Having the last word
he laughed and left
Tonight we melt
shadow and form
together again.
The smile cracked
as guests sung
"Unhappy Birthday".
It won't hurt
to pluck
a thornless rose.
Download a brain
and find memories
to print.
Fabulous, Opheliac! Thank you! :)Quote:
Originally Posted by opheliac
* * * * *
Waiting for you
to navigate,
unerringly,
to me.
So far
three thousand
eight hundred
eighty words
Very clever,Quote:
Originally Posted by firefangled
firefangling friend,
who indeed multiplies well
:)
I must also thank you for the kind complement, CdnReader. It really encourages me to continue. I'm glad you liked that one :)
The house
inside your heart
is now open.
Star splits
and light enters
our cosmic dreams.
Flowers bowed
like acclaimed conductors
in nature's symphony.
Quote:
Originally Posted by opheliac
good!
Pearls fall
from your lips;
what d'you do?:)
Thank you, CR. However:Quote:
Originally Posted by CdnReader
I forgot
to count
the words
I entered
who counts
the 'punches'
in Love and War!
You couldn't count themQuote:
Originally Posted by firefangled
before they were written.
I know one who does.Quote:
Originally Posted by mazHur
Definitely not fun. :(
knowing is one thing
believing is another
story.
This made me smile, thanks, Maz!Quote:
Originally Posted by mazHur
As well, Cdn, you have such witty poetic responses -- love it!
Tangled lines
mean
no fish
for us tonight ;)
A self-reliant bird
knocked again on my windows
And the accident
comes from another arduous experiment
The bird
wonders why he can not fly.
thanks, kiz.
nice!Quote:
Tangled lines
mean
no fish
for us tonight
take one
take all
yours is the haul!
;)
Earrings penetrated the flesh
whispering love to me
I loved this, WC.Quote:
Originally Posted by white camellia
Don't make snowballs;)
unless
you can run fast
Cdn's wings sprouted again.
Flying off.
Back soon.
(My thanks to ALL OF YOU who keep this thread going with your wise, witty, wonderful words!)
EDIT: Woooo-hooooo!!! 500 posts! :D
fly ,my dove,
above the clouds
keep dry!
You know, the birds are really cute - they often make big and sudden noises on my windows!Quote:
Originally Posted by kiz_paws
Ride the snowball we
made and run faster!
arrival under grey clouds
rain hovers
spirits undaunted
There's something
on my mind
is it you?
rain hoversQuote:
Originally Posted by CdnReader
preparing to sing
its' soothing
lullaby
destructive tendencies
sluice and surrender
shadowy crepe dreams
pale grey rain
creates mazesthrough the sunshine
ultimately
it stops raining
mazes transform
into flowers.
No peace,
No lease!
get out!
release.
chaos won't end
peace won't prevail
until death.
rush hour traffic
blocking the western
access ramp
rush hour traffic
blocking the western
access ramp
Sorry, I didn't think it posted the first time.
access ramp
protected by silken tuft
prevents jams
traffic jam
strawberry jam
prefer the latter
Clawless cat
kneads my stomach
like a pillow
clawless crayfish
crawls on the creek
constantly crying.
i feel him
here,
there,
and
all around
what the heckQuote:
Originally Posted by CdnReader
are you waiting
for then?
unpack!
organize!
shop!
study!
no time for love
:(
No time for love?
Why were you born?