New Poetry Game-Cinquain Chain- Come on, it's easy and fun!

with love,
sparkling eyes,
golden glow, bewitch me—
twenty-eight years, not enough time,
my love...


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my love...
my love for you
is beyond time and space
you will always live in my heart
love heart!

im not much of a poetry kid so ill just listen to u guy ok :D

hey mazhur i know what your thing abut the world war means now answer me if you dont know about it :D :D :D

my love
ponders.... lingers....
conceiving nothing but
on whom to fall upon, to be
settled :lol:

....

edit: sorry i thought Pen was the last to hv written a cinquain, my bad. I'll edit the first words by a bit. :)

love heart
ponders.... lingers....
conceiving nothing but
on whom to fall upon, to be
settled

settled
in the centre
of my heart is a nymph
so sweet so naughty. I can't tell
her name

her name
do not tell me
I don't want to hear it
jealous? me? whatever makes you
think that

think that
how would you feel
if it rains and rain drops
kiss you under the bikini
and wet!

and wet!
is what we'll be
the storm rains lashing out
pelting us with icy fingers
freezing

freezing -
it's been so long
since a red nose and ears,
I would like to feel it again,
and snow!

and snow!
Oh, that white cap
worn by the mountains high
melts like chocolate by the heat
inside

inside
you must venture,
inside freezing is warm,
the crystals of the universe
live there

live there
and die fighting
for the cause will haunt you
in life, in death, in life after
your death!

live there
in the palace
of my love-ridden heart
listen to the music sublime
and dance

your death
has saddened me
grief has struck the whole world
I stand at your memorial
and cry!