Waiting to be found
Until glory has faded
My nights, my days, lost
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Waiting to be found
Until glory has faded
My nights, my days, lost
My nights, my days lost
And so is the hope I held
Nearest to my heart
Nearest to my heart
emaciated black rose
deepest secret art
Deepest secret art
Spells of old and spells of new
Tells you how to fly
Tells you how to fly
Strategical matters fall
Why did you listen?
Why did you listen?
Why did you not go away?
But came back today
But come back today
for tomorrow will be gone
Silent America
*Doesn't 'Silent America' have 6 sylabbles?
Silent America
Suffering on the inside
Looking to the past
A proper haiku is more than just the correct syllable count in each line - the first two lines are supposed to set up an ambiguous image that is resolved in the last line, something like a riddle. One example (I cannot remember the author's name, but I found it in the book "An Almanac of Words At Play") that illustrates this feature very well:
Oh! I ate them all!
And Oh! What a stomachache!
Stolen green apples.
Whooopss!! my bad, wasn't counting right.
looking to the past
thinking of green apples lost
alude to eden
Hmm... does it make sense... does it have too. Try to reply as fast as you can.... but attempt to adhere to the 'rules'
S.
Alude to Eden
While looking at the blue sky
Beautiful flower
Beautiful flower
hibiscus brought instant love
Garden of mischief
Garden of Mischief
Is only a metaphor
Eden is a myth.
Eden is a myth.
All our truth is relative.
What book to believe?