Melancholy mind
On a dreary winter's day
Like hibernation
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Melancholy mind
On a dreary winter's day
Like hibernation
like hibernation
mind gently avoids care
thoughts escape neglect
Verybaddmom,
Nice haiku. I liked it. You did need an extra syllable in the middle line though.
thoughts escape neglect
by merging into concepts
waking memories
oops...that'll learn me :o
waking memories
disturbing thoughts persisting
through my concious mind
i counted and double counted....does that work better?
:D
Yeah that works better. Looks like you're getting the hang of this:)
through my conscious mind
precious thoughts of your kind words
find pathways to love
Find pathways to love
Wading through the shallow depths
Of loves divine image
Thanks *^_^*
¬_¬;; I thought this was gonna suck, but it's great *^_^*
Anyone here post on http//www.fanfiction.net/ or http://www.fictionpress.com/ ?
Of love's divine image
comes an image never felt
save me from the guilt
save me from the guilt
my Jewish heritage wins
can we flee the past?
can we flee the past? -
relentless tornado in
merciless pursuit.
Merciless persuit
Ends in silver laughs of sun
Everyday morning
Everyday morning
soft, warm, you are still asleep
I move quietly
(Hi Ruchir! I do not think I´ve said hello to you yet? Welcome to the forum.
And verybaddmom - I liked your haikus. To more in the game, the merrier. )
I move quietly
Carry you like a newborn
Whisper to your dreams
Whisper to your dreams
to manipulate their path
you will love me more
thank you isagel, i appreciate your comments. funny how i am perfectly comfortable posting anywhere else on the forum (except maybe religion) but i was terribly nervous about posting on this thread. however, i read it everyday....just to see :cool:
You will love me more
Than I could ever deserve
Despite what I do
despite what i do
i am faithful to my cause
what was it again?
What was it again?
That made you despise me so
Was it my drinking?
was it my drinking
that ruined my social skills
damn that brown bottle
Damn that brown bottle
My eyes record the slurred sky
Proof to condemn me
¬_¬;; *^_^*
Proof to condemn me,
glistening eyes burn blue flame;
can't smile it away
Can't smile it away
These memories haunting me,
Does my smile decieve?
Does my smile deceive?
Do you not believe my eyes?
Hear words my heart speak?
Hear words my heart speak?
You cannot even see me,
waiting in silence.
waiting in silence
anticipation of love
hurry up will you
hurry up will you
lifetimes apart but you come
home late for dinner
home late for dinner
you are no more punctual
than city transit
than city transit
art thy cleanliness far less
as well -- you stink, boy.
as well -- you stink, boy
so use deoderant or
no dessert for you!
as well -- you stink boy.
must you plow the field barefoot and
sing with trees and birds?
sing with trees and birds
like Snow White without a dwarf
may she rest in peace
may she rest in peace
her heart in little pieces
maggots in her hair
maggots in her hair
beetles crawl all on her scalp
needs better shampoo
needs better shampoo
does my grandmother; poor thing,
the mice have regrouped
the mice have regrouped
IPM to the rescue
avoid chemicals!
avoid chemicals
eat organic this earth is
our children's children's
*children's ad infinitum*
Our children's children's
Children's kids will look back
And laugh at our fate
hi isa.. hi evryone,
nice to find myself here among you
and laugh at our fate
that we proceed on and on
all heads frontside back
P.s. anything not for our threaed..
All heads frontside back
Twisting in surreal motions
Glimpsing destiny
Hi all *^_^*
Glimpsing destiny,
yet it remains out of reach,
striving to catch up
striving to catch up
there is never enough time
to be free in me