New Poetry Game-Cinquain Chain- Come on, it's easy and fun!

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Originally Posted by ampoule

I hate to be a stickler, but I was hoping people could stick to the original rules??? Is that okay?



and so, since the last cinquain ended with 'sorry'....

sorry,
I've been away
I never know its start
you seem to drift in and out of
my dreams

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why not
let your dreams have
some fun and exercise
sit ups and push ups will keep them
active

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Originally Posted by mazHur

why not
let your dreams have
some fun and exercise
sit ups and push ups will keep them
active

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sorry, forgot to start with the first line
here it is:

my dreams
are not meant for you
they are for a birdie
who sings alone in a green patch
somewhere

somewhere
mine is waiting
but I don't believe them
the stars are only holes in the
darkness

darkness?
stars in the sky
are certainly not
they are jewels sparkling in your eyes
cosmic

cosmic
dreams, other lives
so real that I awake
with your fragrance and heat on my
moist skin

moist skin
scattered hair
intoxicated eyes
two spirits engaged in love
all bliss

all bliss
and no white rage
surely nowhere like this
exists within our galaxy
does it?

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Originally Posted by CdnReader

all bliss
and no white rage
surely nowhere like this
exists within our galaxy
does it?

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does it
behove of love
to be classified in
terms of galactic time and space?
be true

be true
to your own self
do not hesitate to
expand beyond boundaries wide
and tall

and tall
stories of love
sound so artificial
eking from edges of your lips
profane!

profane
or sacred, shall
we argue opposites?
perhaps better to remain at
centre

centre
or off centre
earth continues to spin
in wait for another Big Bang
Bang, Bang !

Bang, Bang !
We used to say.
You are dead. Game we play.
Violence becomes reality now--
guess why...

guess why...
you slept so late
in the day yesterday
when fiches sang songs of sweet love
guess why?

guess why,
a grown man speaks,
the ocean in his voice,
full of life, salt of love, harvest
moonlight?