Three People Haiku

This is the first line
I'm writing the second line
may I write the third?

eyes set on mirage

eyes set on mirage
I am in a wonder land

eyes set on mirage
I am in a wonderland
merely a facade

eyes set on mirage
I am in a wonder land
her body shimmers

eyes set on mirage
laid out across the golden
landscape of my dreams

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Originally Posted by Janine

eyes set on mirage
laid out across the golden
landscape of my dreams

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Wow! this is beautiful!:)

craving for junk food

Have you ever thought?

craving for junk food
nice way to put on more fat

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Originally Posted by mazHur

Wow! this is beautiful!:)

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Gee, thanks mazHur. Since I cheated and wrote line one and three; I will say thanks, on behalf of both of me and whoever wrote line two. We work well together....but I am a bit confused. I didn't write line two but where did it come from? I just reviewed the posts and swore I saw that line before. Bien, did you edit you post?

craving for junk food
nice way to put on more fat
one of four food groups!

Have you ever thought?
Don't...close your eyes and just feel...

Have you ever thought?
Don't...close your eyes and just feel...
sensations float free

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Janine

Gee, thanks mazHur. Since I cheated and wrote line one and three; I will say thanks, on behalf of both of me and whoever wrote line two. We work well together....but I am a bit confused. I didn't write line two but where did it come from? I just reviewed the posts and swore I saw that line before. Bien, did you edit you post?

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Yes...that would be me...:)

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