What dread looms below
Rotting wood, subsiding earth
Nutritious soil
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What dread looms below
Rotting wood, subsiding earth
Nutritious soil
Nutritious soil
Which gives rise to good above
We come full circle
*funny, as soon as i read "Nutritious soil" i knew who'd written it above*
we come full circle,
skirting delays (like rhomboids
and bold obstinance).
And bold obstinance
Controls the stubborn angry,
Who guides all others.
Who guides all others
But he that knows the nothing
To be the plenum
To be the plenum,
One must begin with one's self,
And spread like fire.
And spread like fire,
Wild and true burning to show
Exposing the truth
Exposing the truth
Unspeakable. Unspoken.
There for all to see.
There for all to see
is my undying pride that
I will always be.
I will always be
Awful at writing haikus
Because I have absolutely no idea how many syllables the last line is supposed to contain. I mean, my haikus start off okay but then they always seem to degenerate into a verbal morass of rambling incoherence. If anyone has any advice about how I might improve the structure of my haikus then let me know. Thanks a million and one.
well done that man, mine is also dismal with a hint of the really bad
Because I have absolutely no idea how many syllables the last line is supposed to contain. I mean, my haikus start off okay but then they always seem to degenerate into a verbal morass of rambling incoherence. If anyone has any advice about how I might improve the structure of my haikus then let me know. Thanks a million and one.
this isnt going to well
better to give up
Hi,
I've been asked to edit my post so that the fun can continue unabated. Here goes...
I will always be
A slave to an acrid quill
Moved by Satire's hand
How's that? The back of my hand was pressed against my forehead as I wrote it so I hope it's sufficiently lofty and serious in tone. If not I can re-draft.
Moved by Satire's hand
Across the desolation
I stumble aloof
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well done ryan, welcome to the club.. :wave:
ok ill do it seriously to
Moved by satires hand
nope cant do it the nextperson will have to follow on from ryan
Ryan Dollard and dejosc, I'm going to ask you once to please refrain from hijacking/insulting and generally disrespecting these forums.
They consist of members of all ages and many members who's first language is not english, therefore, our Forum Rules are set out to foster a friendly and positive atmosphere :)