if you like bacon
on eggs, I might make your day
start with crisp sunshine
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if you like bacon
on eggs, I might make your day
start with crisp sunshine
Very nice.
I've had my breakfastQuote:
Originally Posted by symphony
with glistening morning sunshine
need steak for dinner!:)
But whatever happened to building a haiku from my last line? :(
Anyway... to continue with the last:
Need steak for dinner...
They still let you window-shop,
if you're born a waif.
if you're born a waif
If you look like a banshee
don't go to bazaar!
Don't go to bazaar.
Those colors that bedazzle,
tincture the night red.
dewdrops make virgin
rosebuds bloom in the morning
into roses sweet.
MazHur, you're supposed to be building up your haiku from the last one (that is, the first line of your haiku should be the last line of the last haiku). :p
Dews caress one rose.
Roses brew one drop in four-
letter word for all.
Nobody listens to me :bawling:
This is the Shared Haiku thread, meaning that my haiku's first line has to be the last line of the last poster's haiku. For example, since the last haiku ended with "letter word for all", my haiku is the following:
Letter word for all
they are worth, could not carry
the melancholy
Symphony is correct. If there isn't already a thread for random haikus, one can be started.
The melancholy
Makes me feel very profound
Depression is deep
Gosh! I just had been unintentionally oblivious of the rules!! sorry and thanks for 'waking' me up!!:)Quote:
Originally Posted by symphony
Depression is deep
Pain's even deeper inside
my heart's no more mine!
my heart's no more mine
It has been to the wild sea
and shall reach to thee
and (I )shall reach (to) thee
with a garland of roses
hand-picked from garden.