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Originally Posted by toni

5--7--5, btw ;)

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Couldn't help myself:redface: Too addicted to free verse

fortelling, future
a pastime guessing
dream to the beyond

dream to the beyond
while living in the present
shatter the mirror!

Shatter the mirror!
and behind discover truth
no more illusions

no more illusions
the one I have is enough
to lead me to hell!

To lead me to hell,
One need only take away
"The thing with feathers."

"The thing with feathers."
is especially made from
strings of glow from hell!

string glows from hell
from the glows, chains, I break free
trapped in a puzzle

trapped in a puzzle
awakened in a labyrinth
dead by winter

(I know it's only 4 syllables, forgive me)

:eek:

dead by winter
body, in obtuse angle
the lonely widow

The lonely widow
left forever gazing out
into forlorn rain

into forlorn rain
drift barefoot pairs of lovers
winter blossoms dance

winter blossoms dance
envelops the lover's hearts
in nocturnal light

(amazing^)

in nocturnal light
we are dancers in the dark
the candle flickers

the candle flickers
ticking into endless night
cold, bare feet on glass

cold, bare feet on glass
dancing into lunar light
knowing nothing but the moon

(I need to learn to write a proper haiku, note to self: 5-7-5)

alternative

cold bare feet on glass
dancing into lunar light
forgetting troubles