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touch into frenzy
un-touch for momentary
sanity and sense

sanity and sense
leave them aside for a while
touch touch touch and touch!

touch touch touch and touch!
your belly's so happy now!
finger-paint romance

finger-paint romance
sketch rocks, mountains ,caves and trees
territory's yours!

territory's yours!
It's manifest destiny!
never mind squatters!

never mind squatters
they won't tell if you don't and
you might be grateful

you might be grateful
for the warmth left in the fire
after ashes form

after ashes form
and blacken the fireplace

where's your final line?

(Fixed :D )
after ashes form
and blacken the fireplace
where's your final line?

where's your final line?
after epilogue's finish
could be a sequel

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Originally Posted by just mercedes

where's your final line?

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Sorry, I thought we were using the last line of one haiku to start another. :goof:

Quote:

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Originally Posted by krymsonkyng

(Fixed :D )
after ashes form
and blacken the fireplace
where's your final line?

where's your final line?
after epilogue's finish
could be a sequel

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I'm impressed with that
cleverly fixed, well done mate...
you're quick on the draw!
:lol:

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Originally Posted by Red-Headed

Sorry, I thought we were using the last line of one haiku to start another. :goof:

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ah, but we are... thing is you need to leave us a last line to use ;) since you obliged this time (and with flattery too...)

you're quick on the draw!
gunslinger of bygone times
dirt caked grizzly grin

(your turn friend)

dirt caked grizzly grin
for God's sake, please get a shave
wash that grime away!

wash that grime away?
the crime scene direly disturbed
vital prints obscured