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My love is like a red red rose
And it glows softly like Rudolph's nose
My eyes glisten with expectant desire
My need for you burns like hellfire
Your scent is strong it fills the air
I'm looking now, I know you're near
Golden Arches! Love's climax!
Coke and fries with two Big Macs!
Pendragon
Only a week until Valentine's day! That is also the day this contest ends.
The winner is Pendragon!
I liked the part about one's need burning like hellfire.
congratulations Pendragon!!
Thank you, thank you very much!
OK this line is next, from a song by Bing Crosby:
"When the blue of the night meets the gold of the day"
Good Luck. March 7 is the deadline.
When the dew of the night
Meets the cold of the day,
When what's new brings delight
Till its sold on the way,
When the crew says they might
Then they fold, let us pray
That the blue will not fight
With the gold when they play.
This deadline is March 7th? Is it over or has it been extended?
I'll give it a go if it's still active.
No judgment yet, so go for it. Wouldn't be much of a contest with just the one entry anyway.
When the blue of the night
meets the gold of the day"
the skies go hype
wondering if it slight
redders or brights
but then sun comes out
and the tan blows right
and everywhere is light
in a colour of height
shimmering white
When the blue of the night
meets the gold of the day
it's Claude Debussy's Reverie
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QRjll...endscreen&NR=1
But when the shrew of the night
tweets the troll of the day
it's Tchaikovsky's 1812 Overture
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cutxFpjKNCs
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2nd stanza...5 minute youtube but at least watch between 1:30-3:51
Awesome Orchestra in Hong Kong and is the most amazing fireworks display.
Be sure to turn up your volume.
And we have a winner! MELANIE!
Melanie well done congratulations!!
Oh thank you! You're very kind. I had to check the first post to see what I'm suppose to do next...i'm that green at this.
I had a little fun with this poem (oh dear, i typed "porn" instead of poem by mistake...eek...glad i caught it)
Okay, let me find a line to post and I'll be back
Thank you again.
You may incorporate into your poem, one or more of these sentences.
It's my signature at the bottom of all my posts:
"Live in the sunshine. Swim in the sea. Drink the wild air."
~Ralph Waldo Emerson
Swimming, swimming in the sea
With the sharks surrounding me
Waiting for them to attack
Turning me into a snack.