Three People Haiku

miracles happen
diamonds form in lumps of coal

Miracles happen
Diamonds form in lumps of coal
It shines and sparkles

Dripping irogue petals

Dripping irogue petals (sorry, I don't know what irogue is)
Dark and running down my face

Dripping irogue petals (sorry, I don't know what irogue is)
Dark and running down my face
The looking glass lies


[me neither, but oh well!] :p

Hi ampoule,

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Originally Posted by ampoule

Dripping irogue petals (sorry, I don't know what irogue is)
Dark and running down my face

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In this case, rogue means stray. A rogue is a rebel or a crook.

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Originally Posted by alakungfu

Hi ampoule,



In this case, rogue means stray. A rogue is a rebel or a crook.

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Hi to you, alakungfu. I hope you know I wasn't being a smart one. I really thought irogue might be a word. I certainly understand rogue, so I think the haiku works, don't you?:)


Maybe I should start the next one then...

the leaf never fell

the leaf never fell
floated is what comes to mind

the leaf never fell
floated is what comes to mind
leased space on the breeze



I agree, ampoule, the last haiku did work.

can you wish on a star

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Originally Posted by ampoule

can you wish on a star

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Ampoule, your line has too many syllables.

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Originally Posted by alakungfu

Ampoule, your line has too many syllables.

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ooops...thank you! :)

wish upon a star

wish upon a star
cement shines in the pooled light

wish upon a star
cement shines in the pooled light
reflecting my dreams

Snowflakes swirl and fall