New Poem - Any tips or suggestions?
The smell of your perfume
and the way that you move
is like a magical spell
or an intoxicating dream
You’re here by my side
Laying ever so still,
I study you naked body
And move closer to touch your skin
In an attempt to discover
with each delicate kiss
the most intimate secret
treasured in your soul
Explore every inch
of that beautiful paradise
possess your body and with each touch
type my name on you
Making you a part of me
And me a part of you
We give birth to joy, a sudden bliss
I’m charged with life and power
A mysterious energy
that I only get with you
and when I have you in my arms
I admire the beauty of your being
As the sun , you enlighten my soul
You the perfect creation
My eternal source of inspiration
The breath of life that guides my way
An erotic glimpse of what could be
Creating a passion deep in my soul
I cannot fight the waves, the sea
Cannot live without you to hold.
Leading you to a unique universe
that only belongs to two,
to a land of passions,
where I undress your shyness
With a warm embrace
free the ghosts of the past
surrender your body and mind
to this longed temptation
Burn in my soul the taste of your kisses
A desire to stop the ruthless time
and stay forever prisoners
of this sweet and insane passion
In this forbidden state
I drink forbidden wine
My lust for you is great
You’re always on my mind
Passion never ending,
Never yielding, Never old
I drink of you forever
Secret love I’ve never told.
