It is like a clawing, creeping monster...
It doesn't bite just makes you uneasy...
and keeps you
while you go on living on the uneasiness thereafter.
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It is like a clawing, creeping monster...
It doesn't bite just makes you uneasy...
and keeps you
while you go on living on the uneasiness thereafter.
whilst you go on living, uneasy thereafter..as an alternative to the closing line maybe?. Felt that I knew what you meant Little Gal, although I didn't, but I prefer the quick bite to the dread that I think you wrote of.
JB... long time... :D so happy to have you commenting.. guess u r right.. as always! thanks a ton.. :)Quote:
Originally Posted by Jerrybaldy
Gosh, your lines are few and the burden unbearable... I agree with Jerry, would give a lot for one clear bite rather than this... well said, Little Wave...
:D you make me feel better even when am jus drooping at d lowest! I just gotta go through ur comments! :) thanks so so much Bar..Quote:
Originally Posted by Bar22do