Spent...

pearl dreams and
songless fear cupped with
difference of
voice and
stilled spin, and float-
all that risen and sinking glow...
No distance and space,
unnamed;
all powers begin in a shade of
roots and entwined words in circles...
roses bloom on fences like
sun falling behind
in quiet standing and wooden gaze
of ease
and slow bleeding.
.........

A moving little poem, Gal, and these lines

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Originally Posted by Little Gal

roses bloom on fences like
sun falling behind
in quiet standing and wooden gaze
of ease
and slow bleeding.
.........

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are my preferred... Thanks a lot. Bar

Wow, this is exquisite. I'm surprised that there isn't more feedback. :) And I was very pleasantly surprised when I read this piece. I love the words used. There is such gorgeous natural imagery that flows so well together. Breathtaking.

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Originally Posted by Bar22do

A moving little poem, Gal, and these lines

are my preferred... Thanks a lot. Bar

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I thank you too... :)

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Originally Posted by BookBeauty

Wow, this is exquisite. I'm surprised that there isn't more feedback. :) And I was very pleasantly surprised when I read this piece. I love the words used. There is such gorgeous natural imagery that flows so well together. Breathtaking.

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:) I am glad you liked it this well... it is always a lovely thing to be appreciated and it feels very good indeed if the appreciation is something like yours...
Thanks a ton.. :)

I wonder how wonderful your imagination prowess is. You seem to be a born writer. Keep up the good work LG.

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Originally Posted by Devilio

I wonder how wonderful your imagination prowess is. You seem to be a born writer. Keep up the good work LG.

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thanks D... :D u r really a boost... :p:iagree: