On a round sky and a round earth
In the long weeds and profound worth
Of brown moles and sound mirth
Of indifference and defined hearts
You sing in one breath,
I believe your song.
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On a round sky and a round earth
In the long weeds and profound worth
Of brown moles and sound mirth
Of indifference and defined hearts
You sing in one breath,
I believe your song.
_____
This is a lovley sweet peom again Little Gal.
I really enjoyed this one very much.
Keep it up!
That you appreciate my work and take the trouble to go through it is a lot for me...Quote:
Originally Posted by cacian
Thank you.
Those last two lines made the poem for me. The same lines pretty much round up the word "friends" too!
Thanks so much.... :)Quote:
Originally Posted by symphony
your words are times better though... :)